Mikudashi Ibari wa Mikudashitai! - Ch. 17

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This really feels like a set up for simply ending in a chapter or two.
"a set up" would've been nice. This chapter was literally nothing but what felt like a warning "hey, this is getting axed" writing wise

This was pretty much endgame. She finally got what she wanted, dude pours out his heart and we end the chapter with her insulting him and "yeah but we ain't dating, duh! And I still am public property!!" forced slut shtick. Now it's just weird if it really keeps going.
 
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Incoming axe?
I thought this was the axe chapter, but I guess there's more?
"a set up" would've been nice. This chapter was literally nothing but what felt like a warning "hey, this is getting axed" writing wise

This was pretty much endgame. She finally got what she wanted, dude pours out his heart and we end the chapter with her insulting him and "yeah but we ain't dating, duh! And I still am public property!!" forced slut shtick. Now it's just weird if it really keeps going.
Volume 1 had 9 chapters, so it fits best if this simply just ends next chapter.
 
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Not gonna lie, the ending to that chapter was dumb as hell. How is he even gonna pay attention to her? She's going to college and he's staying in High School. So she's gonna start sleeping around and flaunting dudes around him while he's still in school? How would he even know what she's doing anyway? Ugh. She's just a dumb character...
 
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Enough with the fucking jacket
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