Mikudashi Ibari wa Mikudashitai! - Ch. 17

[Osha]

CAST IT INTO THE FIRE
DESTROY IT

 

[PlasmaLance07]

Can I write this shit because my God I could do way better, fuck it a dying tree could do better then this dogshit

 

[Doomroar]

I can't believe this nothing burger somehow has more chapters after this

Just give us lewds and call it a day, it was that easy!

 

[InsidiousIntent]

Incoming axe?

If anything this feels like the first swing.

 

[Thyme.Minister]

amazing... just when you think the pair is moving forward in their relationship, the last page always fucks it up. i notice this pattern has occurred for three chapters in a row... what exactly is the FMC making us "look forward" to exactly?

she acts all haughty, preparing to re-assert her dominant cocky attitude for the next chapter, but then the walls come crumbling down faster than the first pig's house made of hay... meanwhile the male MC is too much of a pansy to call her bluff and just walk away, instead entertaining and even encouraging her behavior, which it was established that he doesn't even like her that way...

 

[Mangamoz]

If anything this feels like the first swing.

What does first swing mean?

I apologize for asking a dumb question, but I don't speak English as my native tongue, so I was curious as to what this term refers to.

 

[SilverExp]

You were bad son real bad, maybe even the worst.

 

[screamdoom]

it end? so segs? bad manga 1/10

 

[lesseffective]

What does first swing mean?

I apologize for asking a dumb question, but I don't speak English as my native tongue, so I was curious as to what this term refers to.

Pretty sure he means like chopping down a tree. Isn't going to happen with just one chop, but it's got to start somewhere.

 

[schmackinthedack]

what

 

[Ultenth]

What a blunder chapter. Shame too, I was hoping but…..yea. I’m out.

Yup. Just switched to dropped, that seems like a perfect place to end it like it was axed, if there is anything more to this, I don't want to see it.

 

[0mnifarious]

THOT logic on full display: "You don't get to tell me what to do, but I demand you give me attention and validation to feed my ego and narcissism, pleb! And if you don't, then I'll go out my way to extract it from you using whatever underhanded and off-putting methods I have [to]."

This series started off with a good premise and chemistry between the leads, but fizzled out in the last few chapters. It's like the author couldn't find a compelling way to redeem her character, nor did he/she have the courage to have the MC tell her to fuck off for good (bonus points if he ended up going out with another girl who is cute, kind, and humble).

 

[MiguelH224]

I keep expecting Sticky Fingers to manifest out of this dumbass

 

[Rin2k]

Just fucking put it out of misery!.

 

[jagfanbb]

This girl has a fucking screw loose
Poor dude

 

[yanderecoverl]

Can't wait for more 😏

 

[VahnRPG]

Genuinely thought this was gonna be a "it's all a dream" chapter as I was reading it. Had to go back and read the previous one cuz the....timeskip?....had no lead in whatsoever. Even then it didn't really make sense, so yeah, I'm jumping on board the "it's probably gonna get axed" train too....

 

[InsidiousIntent]

What does first swing mean?

I apologize for asking a dumb question, but I don't speak English as my native tongue, so I was curious as to what this term refers to.

If its being axed this feels like the beginning of a very rushed poor tie off for the series.

 

[motheblackcat]

Wow been a while since I saw that type of big nothing heh

 

[Anvel]

Author you cannot do this, show us the milf first.