Dex-chan lover
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The only good chapter imo was when she figured out he liked her "pure" version moreI mean honestly it was alright
The rest was just ok
Not bad, but painfully forgettable
The only good chapter imo was when she figured out he liked her "pure" version moreI mean honestly it was alright
Well, that backstory was also an after thought, to be honest. At the beginning they were just senpai and kouhai, but previous to the trip the author decided to retcon their relationship into that. That was fine at the moment, because he had grown out of love with her and moved on with his life, yet she kept pestering him, so the fun was in watching her eventually come to regret the type of person she had become because that drove away the only person she wanted attention from.It's not completely out of place because of the backstory. Remember that before the field trip even happens, we see the backstory of them in middle school. He already liked her, he just hated that she became such a slut. When she's sleeping and not putting on her slut persona, he can properly appreciate her.
Imo, the backstory is the problem; making him already in love with her and mad that she became a slut is honestly a less interesting story than if they have no history and he's simply a gigachad that ignores all of her slutty advances.
Here's the 100 yen question -- was that handwave done before or after he was told it was axed? Or was it a Medaka Box style saving throw to try and keep axe-kun at bay?Well, that backstory was also an after thought, to be honest. At the beginning they were just senpai and kouhai, but previous to the trip the author decided to retcon their relationship into that. That was fine at the moment, because he had grown out of love with her and moved on with his life, yet she kept pestering him, so the fun was in watching her eventually come to regret the type of person she had become because that drove away the only person she wanted attention from.
But instead the author decided to use that backstory as a handwave for why he is in love with her and the field trip was just the catalyst for that. It's a retcon to justify rushing the falling in love portion of the story.