I am so very confused. Who is she? Who is he? why THE HELL DOES IT START WITH HER UNDRESSING?! After first page I very quickly skimmed down to the bottom, and it seems to be some kind of fight, which makes me even more confused as to why she wanted to show her breasts at the start...
ps: I almost think this might not be supposed to be a oneshot, for various reasons at the start and end pages