Momose Akira no Hatsukoi Hatan-chuu. - Vol. 1 Ch. 9 - Emotions Mid-jump

[coyote_vdb]

Thanks for the translation.

 

[kiero13]

Dude this is really just deku and toga just by art itself and now MC is really becoming deku by the number of injuries lmao

 

[utinxp]

last page

 

[Dark1400]

It really sucks that MC got the Jojo characters class as opponents, but that is life I guess

 

[just-a-nut]

Thanks for the chapter! I never noticed the boxes honestly, thanks for your hard work!!

 

[StandFab]

On page 9, "What's making you try so hard?" is the correct English translation. You never use the past (tried) when the verb refers to an action that's happening.

 

[Loliphilosophy]

Once or twice leaving your commentary as "TL notes" is fine, but we don't need your live reaction through the entire chapter. Thanks for your work, but if you'd like to leave your thoughts save it for the credits page or these comment sections.

TL notes are supposed to be notes regarding the translation; hence TL notes.

Also, please find someone to proof read your work.

 

[Magnus_Prime]

What kind of bullshit did I just read?

 

[Ingway]

That's like putting an entire team of gorillas against toddlers.

 

[Rowdy91]

I sure hope Red Team got disqualified or something.
Straight up causing injuries yet no repercussions.

 

[LeBronBron]

He thinks he is him. But gotta respect my nigga

 

[rakudon]

They got highschoolers from jojo in this competition. Straight unfair

 

[izukaml1]

Still thanks man for trying hard to translate this manga 🫡

 

[darktennisball]

Wasn't he supposed to be super athletic? Or am I mistaking him by another character?

Mihoyo nerfed a certain blonde traveler after realizing he has many powerful friends. But this mc doesn’t have many powerful friends so idk.

 

[outinthegardener]

Excuse me. I've lost a shoe. Has anyone seen it? It looks just like this one. Well, it's opposite, really.

 

[Sleabedybarb]

The tl is awful, but more importantly are you seriously using AI-upscaled raws?
Because it looks like shit.

 

[rabidporcupine]

“Hey, that’s Hell you’re walking into.”

 

[ngkn92]

Thank for translating. The boxs are good way to replace redrawing.

 

[YamiryuuZero]

I have seen Brazilian translations using the English fan translation as basis because the scanlators don't speak Japanese, but seeing the English translation using the Brazilian one is a first!

 

[Carn109]

Do it for her