Money, Romance and Me

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Interesting concept, with colourful character would be interested in how they would be fleshed out.
I fear the fainting factor will get tiring quickly if its not padded out and used as the punch line each time.
Would be cool to see who would be keeping a lady who has 2 solid gold ingots on her head safe (Im thinking muscle men or standard female ninja spy lady troupe).
 
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She must have a lot of muscle strength in her neck to be able to carry 2 Gold ingots on her head lmao
EDIT: one ingot is like 11.33 Kilos, so yeah she's a heavy lifter alright
 
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Artist drawn some really good facial expressions here and there an yeah hope this one gets a serialization
 
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Ok famnit, change that fake oneshot into chapter 1. Really classic draw man, it surprise me, and the Story' quite good. Draw and story, combine really well. It's like, nice classic manga 90 get uplouded now
 
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The fact that this is a oneshot made me mega sad.

Hope it gets serialized.
 
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It’s not bad. But there’s no conclusion or anything, considering it’s a 1-shot. I wish there was a series, but it needs better art. I like the character design but the MC uniform needs to at least be normal lol. It makes him seem like a dweeb
 
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I would like this to serialize, it has potential and the oneshot left it open for co iued shenanigans. Though the concept my get old quickly, I would hate it if it pulled to many cliche
 
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Good concept, needs to be serialized, the problem is trying to make it more than a cliched gimmick every time...
 

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