My S-Rank Party Fired Me for Being a Cursificer: I Can Only Make “Cursed Items”, but They're Artifact Class! - Ch. 26.3

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Wow back to back chapter! Thank you so much for the chapter!
 
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Author hack: if you don’t want to bother creating believable ways your protagonist can survive, just give them a skill that gives them unlimited luck. Then you can just write off any contrivance as “his luck is so insane!”

Might as well just make Gaile invulnerable to all damage by now. Luck skills alone render characters narratively untouchable.
 
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Welp~~~ didn't expect to see this coming

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Honestly, this has gotten so hard to read, at first I was like hey this is interestingand such, but 10ch in, it started feeling so...cheap? I thought by now the mc would at least get a bit of self awareness (with his interesting quirks being entertaining, like style and fashion sense) but it devolved into a dragged out dumpster fire at this point for me as I DESPISE the misunderstanding trope, not only is it so overused and cliche I want to barf, it's just such cheap writing, like instant ramen of writing at this point, why bother of thinking of a bunch of things and how characters and the world works if we can just say "hehe misunderstanding" to literally everything that happens, and no one bothers to just sit down for 10mins to explain shit to mc until he understands, but then you would need to actually put a though into the story, can't have that!

Tldr: interesting at first, but it got drawned out, boring, cliched and a dead end of a story. Feels like he author doesn't really know how or where to take the story and the pacings shit, the mc while quirky got boring real quick
 
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Actually I dig the surreal comedy! Maybe the pace could be less dragged, specially during non relevant events! And even his "dense and misunderstandings" character finally tone down even a little! I mean it's time for some character development ffs! :dogkek:
 

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