Nakama ni Uragirare Shokei Sareta Necromancer, Undead-ka Shiteita Eiyuu 10000-nin o Sosei shi Saikyou no Oukoku o Tsukuri Fukushuu o Kaishi Suru: An'…

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Some 1d level antagonist party, betrayed for no reason whatsoever, op mc, beautiful woman that for some reason loves the mc. Dunno what I expected.
 
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See, at least it kinda makes sense in Backstabbed in a Backwater Dungeon, because MC was actually one of the chosen ones, his powers were legitimately useless before getting betrayed, and everyone else in his party is already a racist.
 
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Mmmm it's tasty slop time

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  • page 5: You wrote the kingdom's name as "Oldenserafia", but later write it as "Orden Seraphia" and "Ordin Seraphia". Which is it supposed to be?
  • page 8, panel 4: "me" should be "her".
  • page 20: You keep switching from "Crow" to "Krow" for the protagonist's name. Make up your mind.
  • page 28: ... You didn't even bother properly erasing the English text in the second speech bubble. Are you rewriting the now taken down translation of this chapter?
I'm actually starting to suspect that you've MTLed the whole thing.
 
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Why is the whole plot in the title?
Why is everyone a cartoonish stereotype?
Why the art being somewhat competent only makes it worse?
Why does this have no redeeming qualities?
Why does the manga industry insist on producing the sloppiest slop that ever slopped?
Why didn't the computer in which the original author wrote this, explode violently to spare us all further suffering?

Just asking questions.
 
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OK, so a few questions.
1. How is your translation so bad that you use two different transliterations for the protagonist’s name just a couple pages apart?
2. How is your translation so bad that you didn’t catch the burly guy calling himself a beauty when he’s actually talking about the big titted priestess?
3. How is your translation so bad that you didn’t translate the onomatopoiea who are inside speech bubbles?
4. How is your translation so bad that on page 32, you translated watashi ni as “At me?” instead of the “For me?” it obviously means?
5. How many of the big titted hotties is he gonna bang instead of killing them?

I believe questions 1 to 4 can be answered by “Because this is MTL trash.” but I guess I’m just prejudiced, right?
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Mmmm it's tasty slop time
Is the image AI slop too, for the sake of the joke, or only the scenario and the translation?
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