I'm totally down for a manga that basically amounts to a Rube Goldberg machine for producing lewd situations, but the problem with this is that it can sometimes be hard to follow exactly what's going on, which defeats the purpose. it's mostly an issue with the panel layout being too tight, making the whole thing claustrophobic and most likely serving as a crutch for the artist's inability to contrive the situation in such a way as to make "sense" when properly visible.