Nazeka Shitattekureru Gyaru - Vol. 1 Ch. 10.5

[MangaDex]

 

[blablablub]

Great. Now I want the sequel with them dating.

 

[DeadToReal]

The story was cute, but this really needed a few more chapters to flush out the story. The ending was so unsatisfying after all that buildup.

A sequel would be nice, though.

 

[Dul01]

Yeah its good

 

[n3na3]

AH it's over. Oh well

 

[ZeroWWE]

wait is it over?...well pick up boys the Gyaru left us

 

[Imryse]

that was the end?

 

[JethroBodine]

Short, sweet, and to the point. I have no complaints.

 

[Trolliconics]

Wish it was better
But still was better than i thought when i first started so that's a plus
Mangaka has potential honestly
Just needs more time to flesh out the story
And to commit to character actions
Felt like there was 0 consequences for anyone's actions by the end
And there was so much setup to make something more interesting happen
Hopefully their next series is an improvement over this one
I look forward to it

 

[ThatGuyScifi]

Yep a bit of work with a good editor should help them quite a bit in the future. The ideas are there, just needs a bit of polish in the execution. The character profile on the villain really explained a lot of wtf her deal was that just didn't get communicated well. I'll certainly check out their next work when it drops.

 

[neonblue277]

Damm I thought there would be a time jump

 

[Kaito57]

Give us the sequel where they are dating, plz !!

 

[rantau]

The story was not expressed well enough, if the author made like 10 more chapters to build up the story an characters it will probably be better.

That said i hope he makes better manga

 

[IAmJstSht]

Imagine this chapter was just full uncensored plapping.

 

[uweuweodas]

Why