NTREVENGE - Ch. 8
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The facepalming continues. 
Protag is useless as fuck, he helps no one, he solves nothing.
I will only be satisfied if the goal of this story is to purposely deconstruct the classic revenge plot, and is actually showing the process of FAILING at revenge intentionally.
But the more realistic reason is cause the author is an idiot in writing.
Protag is useless as fuck, he helps no one, he solves nothing.
I will only be satisfied if the goal of this story is to purposely deconstruct the classic revenge plot, and is actually showing the process of FAILING at revenge intentionally.
But the more realistic reason is cause the author is an idiot in writing.
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He is writing with 1 hand give him a break.The author really thinks we want to see his bullies have sex... waste of pages
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Bruh. I don't care about the bullies sex life, lmao. Author-san, what are you even doing? I'm becoming so disinterested in the MC that I almost hope he gets caught just because of how useless he is. At first I felt for him after his crush got raped, but now I just dgaf. Bro, you have OP isekai powers irl at this point, how are you this fucking flaccid? Do something you donut.
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His friend is not even a "character", she is just a plot device to excuse his supposed revenge.
She has not appeared again to contribute anything to the story at all.
The facepalming continues.
Protag is useless as fuck, he helps no one, he solves nothing.
I will only be satisfied if the goal of this story is to purposely deconstruct the classic revenge plot, and is actually showing the process of FAILING at revenge intentionally.
But the more realistic reason is cause the author is an idiot in writing.
Let’s split the difference, author hates the audience and thinks we identify with loser MC.
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Hmm
I think you are onto something there. We may have just simply been tricked into reading a regular old NTR story where the protag always loses cause of ridiculously dumb decisions, and the villains get away with no repercussions.
Author may just be going about these themes in a different way than NTR hentai, but the same plot structures have remained. The hero is a cuck no matter what, and the villain always gets the last laugh.
nah, his other shitty "revenge" novel/manga also has the same exact premise as this one and iirc, the MC is also busy fucking everyone who is not the actual bullies lmao
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Look it's called establishing a story folks. Bully has moved on to bang other chicks... imagine the mental devastation this will bring a girl when she finds out she was replaced in days. I think it's gunna be a spicy one when this picks up...
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Looks like there will be another cell mate yeah?
MC low iq moment.
MC low iq moment.
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Well, it is called NTR(evenge) the ntr of the ml comes first and the revenge comes never? I'm struggling to figure out where the author is going with what little plot he gave us and having a hard time remembering the characters much (if at all).
Oh, and the supposed plot point of the lipstick wasn't revealed. I guess the author thinks he'll keep that in their back pocket to pull out at some later date like "HAAA" ... but by then people will have moved on. I'm willing to give a story time to develop but when the writing is THIS bad ... makes me less patient.
Oh, and the supposed plot point of the lipstick wasn't revealed. I guess the author thinks he'll keep that in their back pocket to pull out at some later date like "HAAA" ... but by then people will have moved on. I'm willing to give a story time to develop but when the writing is THIS bad ... makes me less patient.
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He ntr'd the main bully by fucking his gf right in front of him while she begged mc to knock her up
about 45 chapters in, yes.
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This author is a waste of space lmao
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They even told him he has something on his back and he didn't even bother to check, what a fucking loser, how can he be this stupid?
