@VibhavM
Page 6:
I think the translation is something like:
"We'll kill the monster that has unsightly defeated this pro-hero" or something, could you check it again?
Typo on page 8 (?):
"organisations's military" >> "organisations' military" (like this?)
Typos on page 10:
"...with giant monster." >> "...with a giant monster."
"915 employess" >> "915 employees"
Typo on page 11:
"Wat's" >> "What's"
Typos on page 12:
"woking" >> "working"
"defence" >> "defense" (?)
"equitment" >> "equipment"
"embaressing" >> "embarrassing"
"transfered" >> "transferred"
Typo on page 15:
"it' my fault" >> "it's my fault"
BOY HOWDY I SURE HOPE THOSE SUITS THAT EVERY HERO IS GETTING DONT TURN OUT TO BE A TRAP THAT PUTS THEM UNDER THE CREATOR'S COMPLETE CONTROL IN A BID FOR POWER CUZ THAT'D JUST BE THE PITS MAN
Okay, battle suits, manufactured soldiers, human examples and pawns, they're fine and dandy and all. But, who's that guy with such a strong protag aura that even ONE put so much effort into drawing him?