Thx for your kind reply. I have taken a look at your fixes, and they are much better. The he was no longer necessary as at this point she's in high school now, and is full woman now. Your use of gorgeous is appropriate in the way Mahiro refers to Momiji as gorgeous. As even during the show, and official manga. Mahiro is referred to as her/she. Even as time went on the her/she became more used even by Mihari, and even Mahiro Refers to herself as her/she. Basically speaking. Mahiro thinks of herself as a girl. Mind, body, and soul.
Ps sorry for sounding like a jerk. I can be pretty harsh some times. I was surprised to see your reply.