Onii-chan Is Done For! - Highschool ONIMAI (Doujinshi)

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Thx for your kind reply. I have taken a look at your fixes, and they are much better. The he was no longer necessary as at this point she's in high school now, and is full woman now. Your use of gorgeous is appropriate in the way Mahiro refers to Momiji as gorgeous. As even during the show, and official manga. Mahiro is referred to as her/she. Even as time went on the her/she became more used even by Mihari, and even Mahiro Refers to herself as her/she. Basically speaking. Mahiro thinks of herself as a girl. Mind, body, and soul.
Ps sorry for sounding like a jerk. I can be pretty harsh some times. I was surprised to see your reply.
Yeah but the official english translation are incorrect to my knowledge.
 
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First of all stop with the he/she crap. It's she. Also makes Mahiro sound gay, it's yuri. Momiji is a girl so she would be cute or beautiful. Not handsome. only guys are referred to as handsome. It's obvious Mahiro has made up her mind to live as a girl. So it's stupid to use the he/she with her. Here I thought I found a good fan made manga, but guess not. The use of wrong identifiers, and certain use of language made it bad.
Well the obviously it’s going to go that way, since this doujinshi is taking divergence from the original onimai because in Onimai, Mahiro is a man in a girls body. He/she uses male pronouns when he/she alone with his/her sister and female pronouns when he/she speaks is in company. As doujinshi the author has free rain to publish what they like but it shouldn’t be conflated with the original as they’re from parallel universes.
 
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First of all stop with the he/she crap. It's she. Also makes Mahiro sound gay, it's yuri. Momiji is a girl so she would be cute or beautiful. Not handsome. only guys are referred to as handsome. It's obvious Mahiro has made up her mind to live as a girl. So it's stupid to use the he/she with her. Here I thought I found a good fan made manga, but guess not. The use of wrong identifiers, and certain use of language made it bad.
Touch some grass bro.
 
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kind of confused as to whether or not this is gender bend or trap ( males dressing as girls ) manga. Sorry if people dislike the word "trap"
It's a parody of the manga ONIMAI, where a 20+ year old NEET was turned to a ~12 year old girl by his genius little sister. His body after the transformation is 100% a female body but there are moments where the effects wear off and his body starts to revert to a male body slowly. But they're easily fixed by taking even more of the drug administered by his little sister in the first place.
 
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It's a parody of the manga ONIMAI, where a 20+ year old NEET was turned to a ~12 year old girl by his genius little sister. His body after the transformation is 100% a female body but there are moments where the effects wear off and his body starts to revert to a male body slowly. But they're easily fixed by taking even more of the drug administered by his little sister in the first place.

It less of a parody and more of a reinterpretation of the original work since in this alternate vision the medicine Mahiro took was permanent and irreversible. At least that’s my understanding, it could be that this doujinshi author is just trying to ape the original without understanding the authors actually intent.
 
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It less of a parody and more of a reinterpretation of the original work since in this alternate vision the medicine Mahiro took was permanent and irreversible. At least that’s my understanding, it could be that this doujinshi author is just trying to ape the original without understanding the authors actually intent.
I mean... not necessarily. Mihari might have been able to perfect the drug and Mahiro chose to stay as a girl. It's a parody. Or even if not, she might be taking the drugs off-screen. This manga has 1 page per one chapter after all.
 
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I mean... not necessarily. Mihari might have been able to perfect the drug and Mahiro chose to stay as a girl. It's a parody. Or even if not, she might be taking the drugs off-screen. This manga has 1 page per one chapter after all.

Parody or Corruption of the original work it matters little. This is just a side distraction webcomic doujinshi that should really be classified as it own work because it’s not Onimai for one very big reason.
 
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You know ppl in the past could open the comment section of gender benders and not see "pronoun police" losing their sht. This doujinshi is weird more so as it is from a questionable series. The most horrible thing is "She accepted herself as a female so you should refer to her as such" bro he's 29yo who grew up second time with girls. I don't care about the feeling of some tranny pedo, pairing or shipping is already weird if you think for a moment.
This is okay only if you regard this as perverted questionable doujinshi for Yuri fanatics. I don't need no "proper identification" in that case. It's a soft core erotica, fan service sht at best. Touch some grass.
Also I need he/she pronouns :kek:
 
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This is pretty cute.

I haven’t read the source (though I know the premise), but I’m definitely gonna check it out now.
 
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You know ppl in the past could open the comment section of gender benders and not see "pronoun police" losing their sht. This doujinshi is weird more so as it is from a questionable series. The most horrible thing is "She accepted herself as a female so you should refer to her as such" bro he's 29yo who grew up second time with girls. I don't care about the feeling of some tranny pedo, pairing or shipping is already weird if you think for a moment.
This is okay only if you regard this as perverted questionable doujinshi for Yuri fanatics. I don't need no "proper identification" in that case. It's a soft core erotica, fan service sht at best. Touch some grass.
I don’t think his ages was ever confirmed as anything other than 20 something. It’s my belief he’s either 21 or 24 or something in between those two as he was in high school when his sister started to put compete him which robbed him of the motivation to do anything with his life.
 
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Can someone please tell me if this is somehow connected to the anime, I'm totally confused
It’s a doujinshi (e.g. a work of fan fiction) and as has no connection with the original work or the anime.
 

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