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In this case it’s not an option unfortunately. The world itself will end if he leave it be.. I think it’s mentioned early on.i'm always curious with stories like this. With corrupt officials and everything ruined everything the MC trying to do. Why not just leave everything and let the shitty kingdom fell.
Like if i'm in that situation i'd move away to other countries and become adventurer or something. Fk that country and fk all those video game characters.
Yes. The novel translation is hidden per the author’s request though.Does this series have a novel version?
Wait.. what do you mean, last I heard the author's fine with the fan translation of the web novel, heck, the fan translator even consulted with the author on the translations.Yes. The novel translation is hidden per the author’s request though.
Unless I’m thinking of the wrong series the reason why this series doesn’t show on NovelUpdates is per the author’s request.Wait.. what do you mean, last I heard the author's fine with the fan translation of the web novel, heck, the fan translator even consulted with the author on the translations.
The author simply asked for the removal of the light novel illustrations as those are paid content.
If corruption was the only thing they have to worry about it would've been fine. But sadly the big bad got a few tricks up his sleeve that are too much to handle rn.what the hell kind of bullshit is this? The higher-ups are clearly corrupt and noone seems to find fault with them? Only begging them to rescind their decision (probably with hefty bribes), instead of point out how their decision is claiming falsehoods that weren't in the report?
I could see it being realistic if not for the fact that this is relating to several aristocratic families, so doing such a move not only outs yourself as super corrupt, but would also make other (unrelated) nobles feel threatened too and group up to stamp down on it hard.
"Just because"? Did you not read where he'd literally be executed if he didn't?Was Series axed or some shit ?..
Last and current chapter lost HEAVILY in quality and story is now just rushing shit without any further explanation or build up.. its really just throwing events around.
Why bother trying to make Harold more likeable in recent chapters and show his change of heart to just simple crush all progress again basically voiding any and all character development that was made ô_o
He just went to work with the MAIN Villain for 5 years, just because really 😐
I'm saying how it came across for me, since he didn't give a explanation for the reader (in form of monologue, or anything else), he just had to go along with the most obvious play of the villain and then it skipped 5 years with even less of a explanation.."Just because"? Did you not read where he'd literally be executed if he didn't?
Yeah the novel did it a little differently, the time skip happened immediately after Harold was given the surprise death sentence.. Similar to the novel chapter it adapted (there's a novel epilogue but shhhh), they are the final chapters of the volume so they probably needed some cliffhanger/hook for next book.I'm saying how it came across for me, since he didn't give a explanation for the reader (in form of monologue, or anything else), he just had to went along with the most obvious play of the villain and then it skipped 5 years with even less of a explanation..
Since there wasn't really a build up to it or anything it felt unnatural and forced in my opinion, maybe the Novel did it differently, but it felt weird here
From the country's perspective, he had information on an enemy invasion that he knowingly withheld. You absolutely suspect that person of being a spy and/or arrest them.Woah... what a horrid and illogical story progression. Take down an enemy general and get sentenced to death by your own country. Then make a deal to work under the big bad while cutting ties with your family and friends.
Let's destroy character development and go back to being a broody, unlikeable MC.
It usually not that interesting. Whatever his allies said would be ignored by the judge. It's better to be like this to lessen the dissatisfying of the audience (the reader)I like its going to start the real story, but why the rush?
Can actually spend one chapter just focus on the trial, how incompetent the government or perspective from different faction/nobles trying to solve Harold's situation.
Another chapter leading him into Justus, giving hint what theyre doing. Abit background of Justus's crew, geopolitic, or whatever their reason is.
Then, do the time skip.