These adaptations really need to do more showing and not telling or just drop the crazy amount of exposition and turn it into a power point presentation with bullet pointed lists. These past few chapters have been nothing but exposition dumps and flashbacks.
It’s not even anything new, I think in the past 3-6 chapters the same flashback to the cell has been referenced multiple times with basically the exact same scene. Also the sword, bro we KNOW every time he uses the sword bad things happen it doesn’t need a flashback. Or a whole page of monologuing.
At least with this latest chapter we see the story progress if even a little.
I thought this was good enough for a 6, but ever since Harold was arrested this has just been a slog. Back down to 5. Does this mango even get edited? I’m kinda curious cause if it does they should quit being an editor.
It’s not even anything new, I think in the past 3-6 chapters the same flashback to the cell has been referenced multiple times with basically the exact same scene. Also the sword, bro we KNOW every time he uses the sword bad things happen it doesn’t need a flashback. Or a whole page of monologuing.
At least with this latest chapter we see the story progress if even a little.
I thought this was good enough for a 6, but ever since Harold was arrested this has just been a slog. Back down to 5. Does this mango even get edited? I’m kinda curious cause if it does they should quit being an editor.
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