Ore, Yuusha janai desu kara. - VR Sekai no Chouten ni Kunrin Seshi Otoko. Tenseishi, Level 1 no Mushoku kara Restart suru - Vol. 1 Ch. 4.1 - Class

[MangaDex]

 

[asbun123]

Thanks

 

[kingkongkr]

now I gotta wait another month for the next chapter 😭

 

[razorshaleh]

Hhmmm.... change group ?
Change Job class after LVL 30, then increase 6 stats to max out, true RPG gamer

Thank you for translating oh yeah, maybe next time if you want put text on bubble, maybe you can shrink font size first and cut words appropriately. because there are some texts that are too out of bubble text and even out of panel

 

[samura1jack]

Perfectly readable to me, cheers.

 

[GipoScribantino]

Since you are a beginner and you asked for feedback, here you go.

Some parts are unclear, I had to "decode" them to understand what they were trying to express. Please make sure you first read the entire chapter from start to finish before translating it. Never do line by line as you go.
For example: the part with the multiple speech bubbles saying "sh..." were actually a reference to when she said "talented people". She was about to say the same thing, in fact the previous bubble has her actually say "talent", but SR stops her saying "what?" and she stutters the first syllable of the word "talent", so you should've kept the word "talent" somewhere and have her stutter "ta... ta...".
Unfortunately the stuttering leads to a joke about sandworms that can't be directly translated, but I believe it could be recovered somehow.
Please always translate every piece of text unless it's a sound effect, not just speech bubble; they might be jokes but you are removing context from the overall flow. If you can't "clean" the page then find someone who can or just hack a white rectangle or a thick white border around the text.
There are a number of incorrect translations here and there, as in they have a completely different meaning than what it actually says in the original; it's normal for a beginner but watch out, there are too many to be comfortable.
Finally, sites around the web have chapter 4 fully released, no need to release it as part 1. Always make sure you look around for full parts before doing anything. If a site has a both part 1 and part 2 (or more), just join them as you translate them.

Everything else is fine.

 

[Elandriel]

Thanks, it read just fine. I wish there was more of this, it's interesting enough so far.

 

[ciera]

Thanks for the release. GJ

 

[HuTaoDayooo]

now I gotta wait another month for the next chapter 😭

hello , I will upload next chapter on friday or saturday if im not busy

 

[HuTaoDayooo]

Thanks for the release. GJ

Your Welcome is there anything that I should improve for the translation ?

 

[HuTaoDayooo]

Since you are a beginner and you asked for feedback, here you go.

Some parts are unclear, I had to "decode" them to understand what they were trying to express. Please make sure you first read the entire chapter from start to finish before translating it. Never do line by line as you go.
For example: the part with the multiple speech bubbles saying "sh..." were actually a reference to when she said "talented people". She was about to say the same thing, in fact the previous bubble has her actually say "talent", but SR stops her saying "what?" and she stutters the first syllable of the word "talent", so you should've kept the word "talent" somewhere and have her stutter "ta... ta...".
Unfortunately the stuttering leads to a joke about sandworms that can't be directly translated, but I believe it could be recovered somehow.
Please always translate every piece of text unless it's a sound effect, not just speech bubble; they might be jokes but you are removing context from the overall flow. If you can't "clean" the page then find someone who can or just hack a white rectangle or a thick white border around the text.
There are a number of incorrect translations here and there, as in they have a completely different meaning than what it actually says in the original; it's normal for a beginner but watch out, there are too many to be comfortable.
Finally, sites around the web have chapter 4 fully released, no need to release it as part 1. Always make sure you look around for full parts before doing anything. If a site has a both part 1 and part 2 (or more), just join them as you translate them.

Everything else is fine.

alright thanks for the feedback , I will do better on the next chapter

 

[ThreeTakeWonder]

She’s such a brat
I can tell that it’ll lead to tsundere romance judging from the cover art, I can tell that much, but at this point I still hope he gets the item she wants and tosses it at her and just says “You got what you wanted so no need to stick around me, bye.”

 

[MonstaMaps]

flipping out over 3 days of grinding needing to be redone seems pretty ott

 

[Greyhood]

Hello there, thank you for the chapter, overall it was a smooth experience.

 

[Bananoman6]

Thanks for picking this up

 

[AsianChilupa]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[ciera]

Your Welcome is there anything that I should improve for the translation ?

typesetting is a bit rough, but something you can get better at with practice

 

[3leaves2]

thanks for the chapter! really it read smooth to me, I enjoyed it ^^
but looking back the text was maybe not perfectly placed all the time (hey, who even is perfect all the time, amirite?). I thinnk it was nice that you added red boarder to the letters.

And hm.. thinking about it more I'm kind of torn ig? I mean keeping the words inside the bubbles and that. yeah it's nice. but the bigger font size helps in readability too. I guess I'm fine either way

 

[rh75]

Gets mad at her for not understanding his explanation for job change when he never gave her an explanation.
In fact, he just doesn't bother.
These two deserve each other because neither can communicate.

 

[screamdoom]

Woman