Osananajimi Kanojo no Morahara ga Hidoin de Zetsuen Sengen shite Yatta - Vol. 5 Ch. 50.1

[TheWritingWriter]

Holy shit. And I thought "Someone's Girlfriend" was bad.


Btw This is the same person who works on "the dark massacre of the vengeful hero" (goated revenge story btw) and "The Invincible Assassin Mage Journeys with the Final Boss Girl."

 

[Kay5ive]

where tf is this manga heading??

 

[masonery]

hell yeah bro put that bitch in her place

 

[Kay5ive]

Okay, that confirmed it she's letting herself be forced into prostitution for the video of mc wetting his pants as a kid.. also if that would follow any logic, if the blond guy made the video public and there's any form of nudity on it, it's straight up just him releasing CP 😐

I'm genuinely lost on what the story is trying to be at this point, started off as mc trying to better himself after toxic relationship, now after we had a tiny bit of wholesome romance and they end up together we just gonna throw everything overboard and go for a shock factor?

It's getting really hard to read, it's at a point where it's just "Meh" seeing a new chapter, cause it's icky to sit through

FL aside the characters are insufferable in my opinion and mc feels like a wet blanket, it's almost like he's also a reader and just letting everything unfold without actually trying to be part of the story

ion even think the author was thinking properly writing this like who in the right mind would try black mailing someone with cp treating to leak it?

 

[raddcuban]

Working on this needs to get a bit easier. Fed up feeling gross. Hopefully a thimbleful of water will be thrown on the forest fire that is this storyline soon.

strongest soldiers and toughest battles.

 

[raddcuban]

Dawg, you should have learned from the past 49 chapters by now. The villain motive is just added in for the sake of there BEING a villain motive. It's just an explanation for their shitty behavior. It ain't ever that deep bro (not in a manga like this one lmao).

Oh, but there is a "deep" reason for it! It's the author's fetish, and she's spent a long time... ahem "waxing romantic" about this specific sort of characters.

Wait what?
The author is a WOMAN!?

Well that explains a lot, she must be into classic shoujo manga. They love rapey stuff in those "cute wholesome girl's romance stories".

I'll do you one better, I guarantee that not only did she grow up on that stuff, but as a teen she was 100% a yumejo, because all this is right up their alley.

 

[Lunasol]

Why are they shoving villain motive at us as though he has a point to make? We know he's a douchebag jock with a fragile ego that is sexually extorting a high schooler -- what, are we supposed to feel bad for him?

Nah,I won't feel bad for hi- no, the "thing". Beside he think that he got a talent for "business".
Bro, that isn't even a business.
You are so pathetic, Loser Kirigaya.

 

[IotaCS]

I don’t know if the author is desensitized to this kind of stuff because of what she writes in Fukushuu o Koinegau Saikyou Yuusha wa, [...]

I never clocked that this was by the same author, probably because it's a different artist, but that makes so much sense now. I'm not even paying much attention to the story at this point, just curious about how far it's gonna spiral.

Also, since someone told the author on X that she destroyed the story in chapter 46, she deleted the post where she got called out, and she hasn’t promoted the manga on her X since then. Pretty sensitive about it, huh.

I've noticed this as a bit of a pattern with bad authors - they can't take criticism, so their work never improves, which leads to more criticism, etc etc. It's like a feedback loop of poor writing.

 

[SrNevik]

Spoiler

There are some gaps regarding the characters’ motivations. The person giving the spoilers is kind of cryptic about it, but basically, everything that’s happening was orchestrated by Hanabi’s sister. Both Kirigaya raping and sex-trafficking Hanabi, and Nanao drugging and attempting to rape the MC (she tried, but his penis didn’t get hard).

As for why Hanabi’s sister would set up these heinous acts, even against her own sister, that’s where it gets foggy. She’s messed up in the head because of trauma related to their father. The spoiler source said their father didn’t rape Hanabi’s sister, but whatever he did caused her to develop a twisted love-hate relationship with Hanabi.

As for consequences… there are basically none for anyone. Hanabi’s sister just gets a warning that if she tries any more crap like that, they’ll tell their father. Nanao is fired, and that’s it. And Kirigaya will get beaten up by the MC at some point, but that’s the maximum punishment he’ll get.

Well thanks a lot for that. I'll confidently be on my way then--don't think I'll stop by occasionally to check in. Thanks again though.

 

[Kaito57]

Jesus, why does the author keep on trying to make us care about the Ex-bitch ?
I couldn't care less about what's happening to her : she can get sold for all I care, not our MC problem anymore.

 

[browbm02]

Are we supposed to feel bad for Hanabi? Because I don’t.

 

[SpecialProjectY]

Jesus, why does the author keep on trying to make us care about the Ex-bitch ?
I couldn't care less about what's happening to her : she can get sold for all I care, not our MC problem anymore.

Are we supposed to feel bad for Hanabi? Because I don’t.

Indeed.
Ichinose got huge PTSD that will take lifetime to recover at least a tiny bit.

Plus, her part-time-job prevents potential sexual predators from attacking innocent JK's, making sexual predators work for money and putting their cash back to economy. win/win

: smokes cigarette and puts on the blindfold for incoming strikes/dumb :

 

[inkindoug]

From what I could gleam from the spoilers posted in the last chapter

Spoiler

The girl who roofied the protag, Nanao is her name I think - is fired from her job
The fuckboy who prostitutes Hanao - the protag beats him up
The mastermind behind both incidents, Hanabi's older sister - she gets threatened to back off

Also from the spoilers, the resolution for everything should come fairly shortly

Where's the source for these?

 

[Litreara]

Where's the source for these?

The source is @zacthemanwhohasseenitall. He read the second volume of the novel and shared the spoilers in the thread for the previous chapter. They start in this comment and continue in the replies below.

 

[kaisa20]

Well this chapter contained absolutely nothing. Did we really need kirigayas motive? I mean it was so transparent that leaving it unsaid would have been fine. After reading the spoilers for this, from previous comments, i wonder what prompted the author to go this direction….

 

[mgRdr]

Where's the source for these?

People in the last chapters thread posting spoilers from the web novel

 

[McGayveR80]

Holy shit. And I thought "Someone's Girlfriend" was bad.


Btw This is the same person who works on "the dark massacre of the vengeful hero" (goated revenge story btw) and "The Invincible Assassin Mage Journeys with the Final Boss Girl."

SO you say "Someone's Girlfriend" is not this bad... I think I should check it.

 

[jojoka]

After losing gal clean this came to take it's place I'm so fucking happy

 

[Levankua]

The invincible doujin antagonist with a child exploitation video on his phone and an blackmailed underage sex worker. Just unstoppable with no weakness

The president of the united states himself would bend the knee. Truly a force of nature.

 

[drepurp]

You need a extra girl? We got one particular bitch that deserves it.