Oshimai - Vol. 1 Ch. 17 - Fumio and Masashi

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The saddest part of this manga isn't the ending, it's the fact that someone is pathetic enough to write such a mediocre fantasy of their school days in the first place. "Getting hot and fucking every girl in class" is the type of dream you'll only hear from the abused kids in elementary school who are so starved for affection that they can't imagine any nuance to it. It's less surprising coming from this author, but genuinely, I don't think I could write a story more indicative of insecurity if I tried.
 
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@LordFifthIsLife I don't care what the tags say, one half-assed joke in the premise doesn't make it comedy. The vast majority of this chapter was not even trying to be funny. It was just self-insert bullshit. And even if it was mostly funny it still reflects the author's personality. It can still be a self-insert, it can still be coming from a really pathetic place, and it can still have a tone that shows what parts are supposed to have truth to them.
 

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