Osoraku Kanojo wa Ore no Aniki wo Neratteru - Ch. 8

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I still dont like her and i hope his brother either rejects her or shows his true self and shes turned off 🤣
 
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I'm just glad her charade ended instead of being dragged for another 5 chapters.
 
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Ok so I came back late to comment this cause I forgot to, but this panel was clean.

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Genuinely he had more rizz than his brother with this one.
 
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Watch... the main girl that's supposed to be into him is gonna end up with his brother.

Also if the mc doesn't trust women why isn't he actually telling them no, walking away and/or ignoring them entirely... he just helped a girl who was using him instead of actually going home smfh.
 
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thanks for chapter I wonder If actually becoming a real friend with MC will let actually be closer to the brother!
 
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I agree, he's not supposed to be an asshole.

But it's not being an asshole to not help someone who was using you.

Because that's the thing: she was still using him.
He was hurt by the reveal, just that he's so used to it that it's not surprising for him anymore.
So he got all the reasons in the world to hold a grudge.
And even if he was not holding a grudge: why would he want to asociate himself with someone who was using him?


I mean, his whole character until now was "Girls try to get close to me to get close to my brother, not because they actual cares about me, so I won't trust any girl." It's because of that that he was fleeing the heroine at the start.
And the one time we see a girl actually using him... He's just like "No, it's no big deal, i'm used to it".

I'm sorry, but I don't think it's coherent.




I was not talking about his weird tsundere act and desire to trust the heroine. I was talking about the fact that he is extremly wary of her (well,he was way more suspicious in the begining, now he's warming up to her) and he had multiple moments where he was trying to ignore her because of the whole "She will use me too".

That's why i'm saying his reaction this chapter makes no sense:
A girl is trying to get close to him and seems to be interested in him, and only him? "No, it's a lie, I can't believe her".
Another girl reveal that she was trying to get close to him to use him? "Haha it's okay I knew it, now let me help you. Even better: let's be friend!"

I'm sorry but no: she got forgiven way too easily.
Exactly, makes zero sense how he acts weird af towards the one girl who is actually into him but invests zero energy nor care into the women who actually try to use him

It's character writing like that that makes me think the manga is dogshit, is it that hard to keep things consistent when it comes to characters??
 
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I'm all for giving people second chances but she was forgived way too easily.

Author, you can't have the MC being suspicious about all of the women approaching him for 7 chapters because he's afraid of being used again, and when it actually happens, he's just like" I'm too nice i'm gonna help her haha".

No, you just ruined the whole concept of your character...

The way he acted with the heroine until now make no senses at all...
(Sorry. I'll stop.)

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Agreed, they could have easily gone down the road of "second rival girl who fell for MC for one single act of kindness." Instead, she just became wingman (err.. wingwoman?).
I usually use "wing-girl". Flows better even if it can a bit misattributed for the characters age. It can look weird when written without a hyphen or space though "winggirl" :\
 

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