Dex-chan lover
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- Feb 13, 2021
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They're ruining the poor boy, and I'm so damn jealous!
he's only the artist apprentlyoh it's the 67% author, should have known better
Good to see you fixed the dialogue, it's even better than I suggested.p6: You would have tired -> Are you tired?
p8: I wonder if it's that much good to the kids nowadays -> I wonder if kids still think it's good nowadays... | I wonder if kids these days even find it good?
p12: Elves senses of age is so different from humans -> Elves sense of age is so different from humans (sense of age doesn't sound right, I think he's talking about appearance here too cause she's old but looks young so if I'm correct it should be "Elves aged so differently from humans")
what's a handshake washing -> what's handshake washing (idek if these were translated correctly)
p13: I am going to rub now, ok. -> I'm going to rub them now ok?
It's a small hand smooth hand. -> They're small and smooth (two hands, right?)
Does this kind of hand washing exist in this world !? -> Does this kind of hand washing really exist in this world !? | Does this type of hand washing exist in the world !?
p15: Let's not just wash our hands but let wash the wrists too ♡ -> Let's not just wash our hands; let's wash our wrists too ♡ | Let's not just wash our hands but our wrists too ♡ | (or omit the first part completely, we already know what they're doing) Let's wash our wrists too ♡
Hope I didn't waste my time