Otaku ni Yasashii Gal wa Inai!? - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Otaku & Gyaru & Housecall

[bean_sprugget]

Monologuing is creepy??? What planet are you from sir

I don't think they've internally monologued at all in previous chapters, so it feels very wish-fulfillment-y that we so suddenly and bluntly see them thinking to themselves, "otaku-kun is cool". It's as if they exist only for him; if it's established that the third person narrator has access to their thoughts, how come we didn't see any of them before?

 

[xiaxueyi]

I don't think they've internally monologued at all in previous chapters, so it feels very wish-fulfillment-y that we so suddenly and bluntly see them thinking to themselves, "otaku-kun is cool". It's as if they exist only for him; if it's established that the third person narrator has access to their thoughts, how come we didn't see any of them before?

I guess when you state it like that...maybe not so much of creepy but writing issue idk

tho tbh aren't most of these slice of life wish fulfilment anyways :v the theme also goes well with a Japanese saying "a flower in each hand"

 

[chusetto]

Araaa, both is fine

 

[frubam]

Whether or not there will be any romance (and statistically speaking there probably will be), the three of them just have such good chemistry, like they're actual good friends. It's pretty enjoyable to read, and if there is romance this is great buildup.

That's true, but this'll make it harder down the line. Because chances are, one of them have to be the losing heroine 😥