Ougon no Keikenchi - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions:
  • p23 I'm going to tame! -> I'm going to tame it!
  • p30 Why not test to see if you can use? -> Why not test to see if you can use it?
  • p36 I'll attack at once! -> I'll attack all at once!
  • p37 Yes boss. -> Yes, boss.
 
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Quite alot of translation errors and the sfx if not translated shouldn't be deleted.

On page 14 is a sentence missing which states: Let's acquire some new skills......
On page 19 is a small sentence missing related to the ice wolf.
On page 24 is a sentence missing related to her acquiring a skill or getting a INT related skill for that black haired cat girl, it might even be that she simply raised her INT first.


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Fubuki?_? no fox XD?
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Subordinate, what an enviable skill. I would use it to tame all the fluffy monsters and make a fluffy army.
A Fluffy Demon King.
 
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eh. I thought the first chapter seemed interesting. But if the pacing is like this and she just breezes through without buildup and stuff. Seems kinda flat for story.
 
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So they were BOTH scrappy kids forced into a life of violence by circumstances, and... an extremely efficient adventuring party?
 
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classic game manga with unbalanced skills that would be fixed in any good mmo
 

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