Parallel Paradise - Vol. 11 Ch. 108 - Iron Maiden

[Maiorem]

@Joe69420 I already PMed you close to two weeks ago about proofreading.

 

[Meybi]

@Belkin you dirty Belkan, what are you planning miscreant?

 

[Spoonikle]

This series is accidentally hilarious every single chapter.

 

[magnatrout]

Bag of sand

 

[Yunyo]

He's gotten abreast of the situation!

 

[REMasher]

She's completely naked under that armor? The chaffing must be horrible.

 

[captain_crunch]

This manga is gud

 

[fortnog]

This chapter out of context, especially the last page hahaha

 

[maraxusofk]

TIDDY GRAB OF POWER

 

[Siquall]

200 IQ plan.

 

[AbuHajaar]

Everybody gangsta until she screams ECCHIIII and kills him with the hentai romcom slap of death

 

[Nk9bjP4A]

I see..... the author must be a fan of Janet Jackson.

 

[BobBob]

Damn, Amane's fast.

Runs all the way into the city like that and then all the way back in an instant.

 

[Grye]

all for a titty

 

[zarian2]

When in doubt, go for the boobs.

....

Wait no, thats how you go to jail.

 

[Asynchria]

You could use a proofreader, or a better one than what you currently have. There are a few simple spelling mistakes ("your" should be "you're", for example) that would increase the readability by a ton!

 

[Oscyle]

The translation was pretty good tbh, only a few mistakes to correct here and there

 

[Dipuc4Life]

LOL, they got their asses handed to them. What I want to know is this ... If they/she has so much power why do they let the witches do what they want? Are they working with the witches and/or don't care how many of the plebs die as long as they can sit safely in their stone castle? What about the krall(?) ... krull(?) ... kull(?) ... the four-eyed spiky-dicked mother-fathers ... yeah them? They don't care about them killing girls either huh, LOL. Savage.

Also, I doubt that him grabbing her titty will work ... and if it does she would probably break his dick if they DID have sex. She's obviously stronger than you dude. Probably has a bigger dick too, LOL. Maybe she doesn't even get aroused at all. If it works or if it doesn't, seeing her kick their asses was hella funny.

 

[WanWan]

left tiddy

 

[rrolo1]

Operation Tit Grab was a success

Now, seriously, if they have such strong people around, why are they leaving the comparatively weak Guardians do the heavy lifting? I mean, where was this gal when Galia's city was being sieged by a witch that was demanding a person to eat per day? Or are we going for a shounen-rific power escalation, Lynn-sensei?