Party kara Tsuihou Sareta Sono Chiyushi, Jitsu wa Saikyou Nitsuki

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It's not good, but I'm a bit surprised at how low the rating is considering there's only 6 chapters so far. People usually seem more forgiving until it's clear there's no real plot.
 
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Monsters look like ass. Combat is downright terrible. Art is baseline most of the time. The most this has going for it is clothing, hair, faces, and the developing skill in drawing hands. Like, you can actually see bits of progress as the chapters go on. Background? I... don't remember?

Story is meh. It has more and more words as it goes on.

Characters play their part, but aren't as special as ML and FL.

5, as I'm disappointed the drawings don't poke through the stiff panels pretty much after the first chapter. That had a nice impact, but it disappeared.
 
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No wonder this manga is 5 rating, the manga itself is weird.

MC is unknowingly top tier adventurer strong, but the author cant even describe why and how he can be so strong.

From the latest chapter (6) we know the guild
is doing something shady, but its weird for something like adventurer guild undermining the reputation of one particular priest

The worst for me is author doesnt even give a time for introduction/background/personality of each characters, thats why every single character just feeled like another mob. Because the author is busy throwing too much character to you.

And last, i fully agree with @IShallReadTheHeavens and @grim5000 review
 
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There's an interesting story here but the way is told is just...disjointed.
 
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Easy to read if you have ADD.
Good story, though told in a little bit of a wonky style.
I'd love to see this get picked up!
 
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Can somebody pick this up again? It's getting an anime sometime this year.
I am picking up the series, im new to the whole translation game, and this is my first series, Ch23.3 is done and im just waiting on mangadex to approve
Ive found that scanning sucks so im hand transcribing all the text and then translating a best i can with the aid of DeepL and im redrawing the parts of the weird transperant speach boxes that the text covered so theres not just random white spaces so it takes a bit im going to try for 1-2 parts per week
 
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I am picking up the series, im new to the whole translation game, and this is my first series, Ch23.3 is done and im just waiting on mangadex to approve
Ive found that scanning sucks so im hand transcribing all the text and then translating a best i can with the aid of DeepL and im redrawing the parts of the weird transperant speach boxes that the text covered so theres not just random white spaces so it takes a bit im going to try for 1-2 parts per week
also sorry in advance im having some issues with the translations so it may be a bit wonky for the moment
 
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Wow, i've never read something so trash and garbage like this story before. Now i could tell my grandchild that i've stumbled to some dumpster fire in my life.
 
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No wonder this manga is 5 rating, the manga itself is weird.

And last, i fully agree with @IShallReadTheHeavens and @grim5000 review

I checked this cause the anime started and honestly don't get it. There's dozens of these unspectacular/mid manga that are at the same level of art and storytelling but average at least 1 full point higher. I think the standards by which the people are reviewing it are hypocritical since I went and looked at similar mid tier manga they personally said was good and there's nothing about them that made them notably better.

Wow, i've never read something so trash and garbage like this story before. Now i could tell my grandchild that i've stumbled to some dumpster fire in my life.

Not sure someone reading incest loli manga can say they've never read worse ngl
 
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Read up to chapter 10 and had to drop, it is complete trash and that's putting it nicely. Tries to create a MC being hated kinda like Shield Hero but has no real reason for it besides lets hate the MC for the trope check mark. Certain parts of the story are skipped to move the story along but only adds further confusion as to why the MC stays in the same city taking all the abuse like his a Martyr when I'm thinking its his kink at this point. Better stories where you can turn off your brain to read then this one. If you read this you've been warned and I wish you luck fellow dumpster divers. Also nothing like the anime up to chapter 10. Just shares the characters name and location till now.
 
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Story is god awful, and how the hell it got animed before certain great anime... MC is weak and says he not mad at the people who really tried to kill him and abandon him. Save you guys the trouble its not worth it at all. Hell the MC form the commoner to world strongest would have definitely gotten revenge.
 
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I've defended a number of mid and even bad stories before but I really don't think this one deserves any defending. For anyone asking how it got an anime when it's like this, the answer is that they rewrote a bunch of it. So I guess I'll be curious how much they actually kept.

Half the time it feels like the audience is being kept in the dark for no reason. My theory is the author simply forgets to explain things and then operates as though they've explained it. They very blatantly choose to not explain things at times though and it really just comes off as they couldn't be bothered. So most of this just jumps from scene to scene with each event being barely connected to the events that came before or after it. The continuity hangs on by a thread.

I think the thing that sours me most about this approach is that it keeps trying to have these serious moments that other stories spend a lot of time setting up so when they deliver it feels like a nice payoff. But without a proper buildup it's just like .... okay? If you just randomly blurt out these weighty statements in a vacuum there's not really any positive way to react to it.

In short, the biggest thing I think missing here is actual development. Everything just sort of happens arbitrarily and tries to act like it's part of some plan we just never see. It gets harder and harder to believe in the plan when the payoffs never land.
 
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I've defended a number of mid and even bad stories before but I really don't think this one deserves any defending. For anyone asking how it got an anime when it's like this, the answer is that they rewrote a bunch of it. So I guess I'll be curious how much they actually kept.

Half the time it feels like the audience is being kept in the dark for no reason. My theory is the author simply forgets to explain things and then operates as though they've explained it. They very blatantly choose to not explain things at times though and it really just comes off as they couldn't be bothered. So most of this just jumps from scene to scene with each event being barely connected to the events that came before or after it. The continuity hangs on by a thread.

I think the thing that sours me most about this approach is that it keeps trying to have these serious moments that other stories spend a lot of time setting up so when they deliver it feels like a nice payoff. But without a proper buildup it's just like .... okay? If you just randomly blurt out these weighty statements in a vacuum there's not really any positive way to react to it.

In short, the biggest thing I think missing here is actual development. Everything just sort of happens arbitrarily and tries to act like it's part of some plan we just never see. It gets harder and harder to believe in the plan when the payoffs never land.
This manga may be trash but im a Raccoon

Some of yall just ask for too much not every mangas gonna be some profound bs most are super derived and some are better than others but this is by no means bad... compaired to some of the shit ive seen

I persionaly think this is a decent middle of the road manga. it its a bit bland and it dosen't break any new ground but its really not as bad as yall claim it is, story wise its better than most of the bs overpowered harem isekais out there even if alot of it seems a bit vacuous.



anyway if anyone has a series that could use a new translater let me know and ill take alook
the one i was going to pick up got picked up again so for now im just doing this series
 

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