2 comments about chapter 24:
1st, MC laptop seems to be from the present era, I don't knot if really rich people could afford next-next-next generation tech or some company had adopted that style in the end of the '90s but it just looks out of place there.
2nd, Gillian first shot in the cafe, ahem..."Wait, what— what in the world? My god, this must be the world’s smallest coffee cup! It could barely hold an express— express... espress? Espresso!
Jesus Christ."