I really appreciate any translation no matter how rough it is. Your translation was great, keep them coming.
Not a lot of people know how hard it could be to translate written documents because there is really no direct translation for all words or even phrases. Being a bilingual translator, I know this personally, unlucky not Japanese *but slowly working on it.*
As for the SFX, I can careless as I can follow the mood/situation... They are a nice little extra.
Again, I appreciate your contribution, cheers. 😉