Please Go Home, Akutsu-san! - Vol. 2 Ch. 43

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"not my fetish but ok"

Anyway, decision time. As you can see (or not, because they removed their credit pages), Einherjar is back. The question now is whether I should keep TLing this. Honestly I'm not a big fan of their TL, and I hope I've been able to improve things at least a little, but I'm curious what you all think. I'm up for continuing if you like my version.

And if you think I should leave it to Einherjar, do you by chance have any similar manga suggestions? Similar in the sense of short, with easily accessible raws, and abandoned.

Edit: ok, their credit pages are back now
 

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Check this lad's pixiv, if you're looking for some other short manga. I really dig his artstyle. Also contains some lewd, so tread carefully.
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/14025726
 
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I like yours alot more. Ooyama has better lines here, and the vocabulary choice has more personality in it.
That said, I have some suggestions in case you change your mind
"Chichi Chichi". Twice the page size (10 pages per chapter), abandoned for 1 year+. It's smutty but the author is cool kyou and I've always enjoyed his stories, what I've read of it so far was also engaging.

If that's too big, I'd suggest "n-nichigo ni Wakarase rareru Bocchama". 1-page (100 days format), hasn't been picked up yet, chinese translation is at 20 chapters I think.
https://mangadex.org/title/49947/n-nichigo-ni-wakarase-rareru-bocchama
 
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@Iltrof I think your translation is smoother and easier to read. The dialogue flows more naturally. I have no idea which is closer to the original though.
@G-P I thought I recognized the drawing style: it's Shitaranana! https://mangadex.org/search?artist=Shitaranana
Good choice, I follow a couple of his manga.
 
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If you choose not to continue, https://mangadex.org/title/27016/mako-san-wa-shindemo-jiritsu-shinai hasn't been updated for a couple months and has a kinda similar vibe to akutsu-san.
 
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@iltrof Your translation is WAY better, smoother and more natural. Please do continue, I waited for your version eagerly :(
 
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Thx for the chapter . I préférer your translation for a couple of thing but my english isnt really good so i dont like writting à lot so il just say thx you for the translation
 

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