Holy fucking shit I clapped so fucking hard while hearing MEGA SHINKA on my head.
I felt as hype as when I was watching XY so many years ago. Such simpler and better times. I never thought or expected Mega Evolution to appear here.
Mistakes or issues though...
On 14.2 you were using honorifics but on this chapter you switched up to not using them and just using Mr. or Ms. Though checking again I forgot about the Red backstory chapters and on Chapter 0.2 you used Mr. Archer and Mr. Giovanni so no idea. Go for what you'd prefer, I guess. I would totally go for honorifics though.
It's Silph, not Sylph. Page 7.
Crobat not Crowbat. Page 21.
Comet Punch instead of Meteor Mash. 37. 35.
Sean instead of Shaun. Page 46.
Page 25 Doctor instead of Professor. Doctor works but Professor is the most common usage for Oak.
All that aside, thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to the next one whenever it comes out.
I felt as hype as when I was watching XY so many years ago. Such simpler and better times. I never thought or expected Mega Evolution to appear here.
Mistakes or issues though...
On 14.2 you were using honorifics but on this chapter you switched up to not using them and just using Mr. or Ms. Though checking again I forgot about the Red backstory chapters and on Chapter 0.2 you used Mr. Archer and Mr. Giovanni so no idea. Go for what you'd prefer, I guess. I would totally go for honorifics though.
It's Silph, not Sylph. Page 7.
Crobat not Crowbat. Page 21.
Comet Punch instead of Meteor Mash. 37. 35.
Sean instead of Shaun. Page 46.
Page 25 Doctor instead of Professor. Doctor works but Professor is the most common usage for Oak.
All that aside, thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to the next one whenever it comes out.
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