Yeah... sorry about that, give it some proof reading but its still a bit clunky at timesThat TL is all over the place. Ah, MTL that's why.
Why do you think so? Feels quite notEurope to me, looking at the flora and fauna.For the first time, it's not notEurope!
OK, landmass notEurope is one thing, but I meant more it's not the typical "Fairy Tale Medieval Europe."Why do you think so? Feels quite notEurope to me, looking at the flora and fauna.
I don't know the original source, but page 23 sounds clunky, specifically "If I can't calm your anger, won't I end up getting killed?"Yeah... sorry about that, give it some proof reading but its still a bit clunky at times
If you have any specific parts lmk and will fix
It's most likely him trying to explain what just happened. He's describing what the humans were probably thinking when they sent the girl to him. "The dragon attacked us yesterday, so we'll send him this girl so that he doesn't attack us anymore".I don't know the original source, but page 23 sounds clunky, specifically "If I can't calm your anger, won't I end up getting killed?"
I assume this is the elf and dragon speaking to each other about the sacrifice, where the dragon wants to return her, the elf is saying it's impossible, and the dragon clarifying he's not angry. The sacrifice doesn't have language yet, so she can't speak from her perspective yet. Should it be "If she can't calm your anger, won't she end up getting killed?" as the elf is saying that particular bit? Or am I misunderstanding this exchange?
Huh. I was right. The novel has the elf speaking there.It's most likely him trying to explain what just happened. He's describing what the humans were probably thinking when they sent the girl to him. "The dragon attacked us yesterday, so we'll send him this girl so that he doesn't attack us anymore".
Although this era didn't have elaborate clothing, her hair was decorated by flowers and she wore a necklace made out of carved turquoise-colored stones. She was obviously decorated for a specific reason.
"I guess… this is that, isn't it…"
"A sacrifice."
Nina said the word I was thinking out loud.
"I wonder if we can send her back…"
"I guess they want you to kill her to appease your anger?"
"I'm not even angry though…"
Not medieval, but blonde elf with long ears and european-style dragon still make it "Fairy Tale Europe".OK, landmass notEurope is one thing, but I meant more it's not the typical "Fairy Tale Medieval Europe."
Tho the elves lack education they’re still pretty educated. They got language and magic. They don’t need to worry about attacks thanks to magic. So even though magic is a crutch, they can still take the time to develop other things. Besides clothing can relate to culture and how they liveThat TL is all over the place. Ah, MTL that's why.
And it seems like they're not going to mention how the elves lack education but have some pretty ornate outfits going on.