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Thanks for the chapter 🙏🏼❤️
Honestly, this feels like a pretty basic spy story plot line. Rather than creating a new identity, they instead just disavow their own spy and have her get recruited by the enemy nation/organization since they’ll clearly have a bone to pick with their old bosses for firing them.It isn't smart. It's quite convoluted and braindead in fact. It's like a dumbass's idea of how a smart plan full of intrigue would look like. All this just to gather information about who was behind the wolf/card incident. Well this is a shoujo so can't expect much.
I have long given up to hold this story accountable and make sense. My disbelief has been suspended so much it now can hold 5 10-ton trucks.So, the exile was just an excuse for her to go away?, couldn´t they do something less extreme, like a study trip?
This whole thing seems so flimsy, like, so many things need to work, way too many to keep my disbelief suspended.
Now i kind of want her to have a fake out death, just to see the reactions of everyone back home to the almost obvious failure of this "master" plan (i might be too stupid to see how this is smart), i kind of want to see all of them reacting to her not existing anymore (it is a feeling that i´ve had since quite a lot of chapters already, first story where i have this feeling, too much Karma unbalanced i think)
Problem is, unless this kingdom also has zero information network like the MC's, they should know what the MC has been exiled for. Which is the attempting (and party successful according to the ruse) brainwashing of royalty. No one with half a brain would allow her anywhere near royalty wherever she goes. As soon as she is found out, this plan of infiltrating a suspicious nation is dead in the water from the get go (if the story was well written that is). They also destroyed her and her family's reputation in order to so which is beyond retarded because good luck building it back up trying to convince the entire nation that she didn't just successfully mind control the authorities in order to return.Honestly, this feels like a pretty basic spy story plot line. Rather than creating a new identity, they instead just disavow their own spy and have her get recruited by the enemy nation/organization since they’ll clearly have a bone to pick with their old bosses for firing them.
Mc is pretty well known here so going undercover would probably end in her Identity getting found out and an international incident taking place. But now she has a well known cover story. She was exiled. The princes will figure this out and want to recruit her as a weapon (especially since their nation has few magic users).
Her reputation, sure; that's what exile does. But her family's reputation is fine; Alicia has always been considered the odd one out. It is well known in niche circles that she had been a source of constant frustration for her family with the way she is constantly picking flights and causing trouble.Problem is, unless this kingdom also has zero information network like the MC's, they should know what the MC has been exiled for. Which is the attempting (and party successful according to the ruse) brainwashing of royalty. No one with half a brain would allow her anywhere near royalty wherever she goes. As soon as she is found out, this plan of infiltrating a suspicious nation is dead in the water from the get go (if the story was well written that is). They also destroyed her and her family's reputation in order to so which is beyond retarded because good luck building it back up trying to convince the entire nation that she didn't just successfully mind control the authorities in order to return.