Rent-A-Girlfriend - Vol. 34 Ch. 293 - The Children And The Girlfriend (2)

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What's funny is that even if Kazuya did become a demon king, all it would take is an attractive girl like Chizuru to distract him in his thoughts long enough to give the killing blow. Or if you want a more devastating move, make sure the person is wearing a beret while NTR-ing him then killing him. Thanks for the chapter.
 
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Seems my comment from last chapter is still relevant. Although this time the "Kazuya thinking about how worthless he is" is spread out throughout the whole chapter instead of the first 8 pages:
How to write a new chapter for Rental Girlfriend:
Pages 1 - 8 should have Kazuya thinking about how worthless he is and how pretty Mizuhara is
Page 9 should have Chizuru acknowledge how fuckin weird he's being
Page 10 - 13 should be Kazuya going back to thinking about how amazing she is for noticing him at all (added bonus, have some background characters take notice)
The rest of the chapter can have an atom of development and then do the same thing next week.

I hate complaining but Damn I haven't seen Manga Milking this bad since Nisekoi. I just want his stupid ass to get a move on
At least some semblance of progress is being made...
 
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I thought this was a good chapter and wanted what others thought that was a mistake
 

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