Rent-A-Girlfriend - Vol. 34 Ch. 293 - The Children And The Girlfriend (2)

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Tbh from their behaviour Chiz and Kaz fit more into the kindergarten group than what I'd imagine university students / young adults to act like.
Also, I guess last chapter's comments were right about Kaz being a bad influence on those minors (unsurprisingly).
 
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saw that coming when kazuya mentioned her B in previous chap lol
 
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how can the mangaka not be bored typing the same inner monologue's about Chizuru every chapter? Or does he already have some kind of text file for this
I'm a 100% convinced this mother fucker knows people hate watch his stuff so he trolls everyone on purpose to keep it popular and get the money rolling. I'd have said mentally ill after seeing his Twitter but I'm leaning more for money grubbing troll considering this story was coherent at some point and that he's married
 
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I'm a 100% convinced this mother fucker knows people hate watch his stuff so he trolls everyone on purpose to keep it popular and get the money rolling. I'd have said mentally ill after seeing his Twitter but I'm leaning more for money grubbing troll considering this story was coherent at some point and that he's married
Then again, the special showed he lives separately so that he and his assistants can "concentrate on the work" while she does her own thing. Gotta write what you know, eh? :sneaky:
 
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1. Oh shit, Kazuya being good at smth besides fucking it up?
2. I knew Kazuya was going to imagine Chizuru as his wife or smth
3. Fuck em kids
 
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Reminder that, on those rare occasions we get significant internal Chizzalogue, she's just as down bad for Kaz as he is for her. Just slightly less delusional about it.
citation needed- I don't remember her admiring his body or wanting to sleep with him
 
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Actually crazy how dude is trying to fit 300 chapters worth of characters getting to know each other in 3 chapters
 
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Dropped after the cuck chapter and decided to check out the most recent chapter of this god-awful manga to see if it's improved any or maybe even if the story's pogressed. No, not at all.

On another note, I notice that the author's obsessed with large panels of just Chizuru. They just kind of appear without a reason
 
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Dropped after the cuck chapter and decided to check out the most recent chapter of this god-awful manga to see if it's improved any or maybe even if the story's pogressed. No, not at all.

On another note, I notice that the author's obsessed with large panels of just Chizuru. They just kind of appear without a reason
bc chizuru cute
 
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Dropped after the cuck chapter
My best guess is the mega-awful chapter that got me to drop for quite a while, where he cry-fantasizes in vivid detail that other guys are railing her while he faps to it. :sick:

Otherwise, you have to be a LOT more specific with this manga. ;)
 
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What the hell is this chapter, after slight improvement in the last chapter the quality is plummeting down again.. Someone need to take the author to therapy..
 
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I'm a 100% convinced this mother fucker knows people hate watch his stuff so he trolls everyone on purpose to keep it popular and get the money rolling. I'd have said mentally ill after seeing his Twitter but I'm leaning more for money grubbing troll considering this story was coherent at some point and that he's married
i guess he just lets AI write a basic script, sends it to the illustrator and calls it a day.

Here:
Chapter Title: A Day in the Park


Panel 1: Wide shot of a bustling city park on a sunny day.
Narration box: "It's a perfect day to visit the park, and after much convincing, Kazuya managed to get Chizuru to come along."

Panel 2: Close-up of Kazuya, excitedly carrying a bag of snacks, looking over his shoulder at Chizuru.
Kazuya (thoughts): This is it! Just a simple, normal date with Chizuru... in the park! Don’t mess this up, Kazuya!

Panel 3: Chizuru in casual clothes, looking stylish and relaxed, a small smile on her face as she watches the ducks on a nearby pond.
Chizuru: “You know, I don’t usually do dates in places like this.”
Kazuya: blushing and rubbing the back of his neck “Y-Yeah, I thought it’d be a change of pace! I mean... the park’s kinda nice, right?”


Panel 4: They walk side by side along the path, passing various park-goers. Kazuya tries to build up the courage to hold her hand but pulls back last minute.
Kazuya (thoughts): Should I hold her hand? Would it be too forward? She is my rental girlfriend, after all...
Chizuru (glancing sideways at Kazuya): “Is something wrong?”
Kazuya: “N-No! Everything’s great!”


Panel 5: They come across a large fountain surrounded by flower beds. Families and couples are scattered around, relaxing and chatting.
Chizuru: sighs happily “It’s so peaceful here.”
Kazuya (excited): “Hey, I brought some snacks! Want to sit by the fountain and take a break?”
Chizuru: smiling “Sure.”

Panel 6: They sit down on a bench near the fountain. Kazuya takes out a couple of drinks and some snacks.
Chizuru: “You brought my favorite drink?”
Kazuya: laughing nervously “Well, I, uh... kind of remembered!”


Panel 7: A scene showing the two of them quietly eating, but Chizuru’s gaze softens as she watches a family with a small child nearby.
Chizuru (thinking): It’s strange... spending time with him in a setting like this almost feels... real.

Panel 8: Kazuya notices her staring at the family and decides to speak up, though awkwardly.
Kazuya: “Hey, Chizuru... uh, have you ever thought about, y’know... what it’d be like to, uh... have a family someday?”
Chizuru (slightly surprised): “Why are you asking?”
Kazuya (nervously): “I just thought... you know, it’s something people usually think about, right?”


Panel 9: Chizuru looks thoughtful as she watches the family again.
Chizuru: “I guess... I’ve thought about it a little. But life doesn’t always work out the way you plan.”
Kazuya: “Y-Yeah, that’s true...” looks down, a bit embarrassed “I didn’t mean to pry or anything.”

Panel 10: Chizuru glances at Kazuya and smiles softly, and for a moment, there’s a rare warmth between them.
Chizuru: “It’s fine, Kazuya. Honestly, sometimes it’s nice to just... relax like this and not have to think about everything else.”


Panel 11: Suddenly, a soccer ball comes flying towards them from behind, bouncing past them and startling both of them.
Kazuya: “Whoa!” almost spills his drink
Chizuru: calmly catches the ball with one hand “Looks like you almost got taken out.”

Panel 12: A young boy runs over to them, panting, looking embarrassed.
Boy: “S-Sorry! My ball got away from me...”
Chizuru: handing him the ball with a kind smile “It’s no problem. Here you go!”
Boy: “Thank you, miss!” runs off happily


Panel 13: Kazuya stares at her, impressed.
Kazuya (thoughts): She just... handled that so effortlessly. She’s amazing!

Panel 14: Chizuru notices him staring and tilts her head slightly, a playful smile on her face.
Chizuru: “What? You act like you’ve never seen someone catch a soccer ball before.”
Kazuya (flustered): “N-No, I mean... yeah! You were just... really cool back there.”


Panel 15: They both laugh, and as they relax back on the bench, a gentle breeze blows through the trees, scattering some cherry blossoms around them.
Chizuru: “Thanks for inviting me, Kazuya. Today has been... surprisingly nice.”
Kazuya: blushing but happy “I’m glad you think so. I just... I just wanted to spend some time with you outside of... you know... work.”


Panel 16: The scene shifts to a close-up of Chizuru’s hand resting on the bench, her fingers subtly brushing against Kazuya’s. They both blush, but neither pulls away.
Kazuya (thoughts): This... this feels like a real date...

Panel 17: A wide shot of them sitting together, bathed in the golden light of the setting sun as they enjoy the moment.
Narration box: “Sometimes, a day in the park is more than it seems.”
Just fill the rest up with huge shots of Chizuru, internal monologue about how cute she is and done.
 

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