Well this chapter was really boring. "Oni different culture, bla bla bla, fantasy, children drinking alcohol is fine". Dias. Fucking put your foot down. Stop being such a massive push over. She might be your FUTURE!!! wife and all, please STOP letting her walk all over you.
Also, clearly the mouse is from an intelligent species, not the rodents you are used to Aruna, so the super hostility is clearly not needed.
Edit: page 3-14 read like a bloody mess, jumping between things the entire time. Start at x, then go y then z, not yzxyxyzx.