Ryoushin no Shakkin wo Katagawari shite morau Jouken wa Nihon Ichi Kawaii Joshikousei to Issho ni Kurasu koto deshita.

[tehyar]

It’s too bad this author doesn’t have more talent for using manga art as a medium to tell the story, instead of writing a light novel’s worth of words in inner dialog.

 

[ExarchOfAfrica]

Another shitty love triangle, I swear these authors are too wimp to make a compelling love story so instead they throw cheap drama in that only sours the mood of the story and brings into immediate question how this supposedly "loser" boy has an already respectable girl secretly crushing on him?

 

[Arr1610]

This is sweet . I love it

 

[Metalheadzaid]

The main issue with this series is that the MC's trauma isn't portrayed openly enough. On the flip side, they do an excellent job of making the MC follow through with his personality - he doesn't become a blushing simp when approached aggressively and teases right back, which gives the impression that he's far more out there than he means to be to the public, even though internally he's just "standing up for himself."

This would be a better series if they had a bit more plot regarding his internal feelings and thoughts and a little less fan service focus, but it's not bad.

 

[nullUserExceptionError]

I wanna read one of these where the guy goes to a lawyer and goes through a whole legal battle over the girl trying to own him, and his parents trying to put the debt on him.

 

[Ketsuekiseiyaku]

I like the story but those rectangular monologues I really hate them and like a non creative sadist writer those internal dialogues are in every page, meh who cares the girl is cute and I hope other mangakas suffer reading this contradiction
and don't make the same mistake in their stories mostly in the in "the eternal monologues" uncanny valey

i was wondering if she was psychic the way she was responding to what i THOUGHT were his though blocks. i have never seen spoken words in squares, that's usually reserved for thoughts. i'm only on chapter 6, but i hope it stops so i don't end up confused during every conversation.

 

[Lewd_Beast]

I like the story but those rectangular monologues I really hate them and like a non creative sadist writer those internal dialogues are in every page, meh who cares the girl is cute and I hope other mangakas suffer reading this contradiction
and don't make the same mistake in their stories mostly in the in "the eternal monologues" uncanny valey

Trying to get more of the light novel into the Manga, probably...

 

[Lewd_Beast]

I'm not sure if I knowing smile or shake my head in despair at this kind of unrealistic wish fulfilment story. I mean, the MOST beautiful schoolgirl in all of Japan??? Firstly, someone please tell me that there is really no such competition... But, why does she have to be the ultimate of anything? It seems to be an exceedingly pointless set-up. Why can't she just be a good-looking girl? Is it to bring the wrath of the entire nation down on this poor lad's head? Does this amp the comedy up for the author?
Saying that I'm on board for this story ;-)

 

[Tenkamilop]

Cute girl, but this topic has two new popular manga. (debt inherited and paid off by rich girl), wonder why they both came out and if either is a clone of the other.

do u still have the other manga title with this similar topic? im curious

 

[Tenkamilop]

:>

 

[Eikbyrnir]

My problem with a lot of Manga, and I know many others have the same complaint constantly, is the lack of a backbone. As in the first chapter when they start talking down to Taka-San. Bro MC, stand up for the person you considered akin to a big brother. And then the second getting called property, like "see ya," gonna go with the big bad Yakuza.

 

[Lewd_Beast]

I've tried reading the light novel of this, and my word it is truly awful. The manga team have really had to work to get the story as acceptable as it is, because the book is written like Stephenie Meyer's Twilight books, with stilted and verbose prose and as virginal and chased as a Victorian novel. Our MC is less beta simp than say Aname in "The Angel Next Door Spoils me Rotten", but his motivations are all over the place in the book. While is is happy to tease her for being so forward, he is such a simp at his core. The Manga is making him a bit more believable, but eventually the manga is going to have to follow the LN and have them sharing a bed while still not actually doing anything remotely romantic or sexual. It is like the author wants to tease people with mature content, but having to keep it child friendly. So, I am half way through the book and totally frustrated and hating it, but I'm hoping the manga will continue to beat the story into better shape and actually make it believable and drop the Twilight-esque flowery frigidity.

 

[Guesto]

Idk what to write but this is just your average man x the most super very ultra mega beautiful girl love you with light-hearted reason lol. boring 4/10.