Ryoushin no Shakkin wo Katagawari shite morau Jouken wa Nihon Ichi Kawaii Joshikousei to Issho ni Kurasu koto deshita.

[tehyar]

It’s too bad this author doesn’t have more talent for using manga art as a medium to tell the story, instead of writing a light novel’s worth of words in inner dialog.

 

[ExarchOfAfrica]

Another shitty love triangle, I swear these authors are too wimp to make a compelling love story so instead they throw cheap drama in that only sours the mood of the story and brings into immediate question how this supposedly "loser" boy has an already respectable girl secretly crushing on him?

 

[Arr1610]

This is sweet . I love it

 

[Metalheadzaid]

The main issue with this series is that the MC's trauma isn't portrayed openly enough. On the flip side, they do an excellent job of making the MC follow through with his personality - he doesn't become a blushing simp when approached aggressively and teases right back, which gives the impression that he's far more out there than he means to be to the public, even though internally he's just "standing up for himself."

This would be a better series if they had a bit more plot regarding his internal feelings and thoughts and a little less fan service focus, but it's not bad.

 

[nullUserExceptionError]

I wanna read one of these where the guy goes to a lawyer and goes through a whole legal battle over the girl trying to own him, and his parents trying to put the debt on him.

 

[Ketsuekiseiyaku]

I like the story but those rectangular monologues I really hate them and like a non creative sadist writer those internal dialogues are in every page, meh who cares the girl is cute and I hope other mangakas suffer reading this contradiction
and don't make the same mistake in their stories mostly in the in "the eternal monologues" uncanny valey

i was wondering if she was psychic the way she was responding to what i THOUGHT were his though blocks. i have never seen spoken words in squares, that's usually reserved for thoughts. i'm only on chapter 6, but i hope it stops so i don't end up confused during every conversation.

 

[Lewd_Beast]

I like the story but those rectangular monologues I really hate them and like a non creative sadist writer those internal dialogues are in every page, meh who cares the girl is cute and I hope other mangakas suffer reading this contradiction
and don't make the same mistake in their stories mostly in the in "the eternal monologues" uncanny valey

Trying to get more of the light novel into the Manga, probably...

 

[Lewd_Beast]

I'm not sure if I knowing smile or shake my head in despair at this kind of unrealistic wish fulfilment story. I mean, the MOST beautiful schoolgirl in all of Japan??? Firstly, someone please tell me that there is really no such competition... But, why does she have to be the ultimate of anything? It seems to be an exceedingly pointless set-up. Why can't she just be a good-looking girl? Is it to bring the wrath of the entire nation down on this poor lad's head? Does this amp the comedy up for the author?
Saying that I'm on board for this story ;-)

 

[Tenkamilop]

Cute girl, but this topic has two new popular manga. (debt inherited and paid off by rich girl), wonder why they both came out and if either is a clone of the other.

do u still have the other manga title with this similar topic? im curious

 

[Tenkamilop]

:>

 

[Eikbyrnir]

My problem with a lot of Manga, and I know many others have the same complaint constantly, is the lack of a backbone. As in the first chapter when they start talking down to Taka-San. Bro MC, stand up for the person you considered akin to a big brother. And then the second getting called property, like "see ya," gonna go with the big bad Yakuza.

 

[Lewd_Beast]

I've tried reading the light novel of this, and my word it is truly awful. The manga team have really had to work to get the story as acceptable as it is, because the book is written like Stephenie Meyer's Twilight books, with stilted and verbose prose and as virginal and chased as a Victorian novel. Our MC is less beta simp than say Aname in "The Angel Next Door Spoils me Rotten", but his motivations are all over the place in the book. While is is happy to tease her for being so forward, he is such a simp at his core. The Manga is making him a bit more believable, but eventually the manga is going to have to follow the LN and have them sharing a bed while still not actually doing anything remotely romantic or sexual. It is like the author wants to tease people with mature content, but having to keep it child friendly. So, I am half way through the book and totally frustrated and hating it, but I'm hoping the manga will continue to beat the story into better shape and actually make it believable and drop the Twilight-esque flowery frigidity.

 

[Guesto]

Idk what to write but this is just your average man x the most super very ultra mega beautiful girl love you with light-hearted reason lol. boring 4/10.

 

[Dilwale]

I like the story but those rectangular monologues I really hate them and like a non creative sadist writer those internal dialogues are in every page, meh who cares the girl is cute and I hope other mangakas suffer reading this contradiction
and don't make the same mistake in their stories mostly in the in "the eternal monologues" uncanny valey

Bro u r Absolutely right

 

[Dilwale]

Bro what is this , too long sentences, and this is too dumb ,his father went to usa or something while leaving his son but his house is basically sold to that girl family and u know japanese house cost around 35 million or 50 milion yen, they literally said this house would be demolished and that land will be rented to someone, wtf is going I'm dropping this childish mature

 

[Dilwale]

This girl is too spoiled

 

[dontprepublish]

(I’ve read up to ch30, if things actually get better after that then oh well, I guess this comment will look even dumber)

I’ll be honest if I were to rate this based off the first one or two chapters alone it’d be a 8, even if you included up to the first 10 to 15 or so I’d still give it a 7 or 7.5, the seemingly emotionally intelligent and self aware MC, the mafia men who aren’t heartless bastards and have probably been taking care of him for a while, the mysterious cute rich girl who (surprise!) is actually just some horny freak looking to get her rocks off by forcing some poor kid into playing house with her and satisfying her crippling need for genuine affection and care (enabled by her rich family of course), who would’ve guessed, and the scene of him legitimately breaking down a little at the realization that he was utterly abandoned by the only family he had, completely uninterrupted and not used to either artificially prop up FMC by having her comfort him even though she’s partly responsible but instead entirely by his lonesome which really sells his plight, all of these things were not that groundbreaking or even well executed but it was enough to convince me to meet the story on its terms if it meant the characters were allowed to have at least convincing struggles.

Welp, no surprise that basically goes out the window the minute they go to school, and no I’m not complaining that the romance got put on hold for dumb school drama, i don’t care for how quickly the MC pushed aside his grief and I had already given up on the MC ever giving legitimate pushback to the relationship the moment he started flirting back with her, thus abandoning what made it interesting in the first place, but what truly killed it was the MC’s friends. I don’t need to talk about why Ai is an insufferable 3rd wheel love interest/“best friend” if you’ve read anything past ch18 and I’m confident in saying shinji is practically unlikable although him actually having a girlfriend (annoying as she is) of his own instead of mooching good vibes off the MC was a decent change of pace.

At the end of the day this was destined to be slop from the beginning, but damn it if some of these authors don’t set up plots with legitimate intrigue in them only to immediately abandon it once they see a chance to rehash tropes for the millionth time and turn characters into caricatures utilized solely for stalling anything interesting from happening.

 

[Skywagon]

I've tried reading the light novel of this, and my word it is truly awful. The manga team have really had to work to get the story as acceptable as it is, because the book is written like Stephenie Meyer's Twilight books, with stilted and verbose prose and as virginal and chased as a Victorian novel. Our MC is less beta simp than say Aname in "The Angel Next Door Spoils me Rotten", but his motivations are all over the place in the book. While is is happy to tease her for being so forward, he is such a simp at his core. The Manga is making him a bit more believable, but eventually the manga is going to have to follow the LN and have them sharing a bed while still not actually doing anything remotely romantic or sexual. It is like the author wants to tease people with mature content, but having to keep it child friendly. So, I am half way through the book and totally frustrated and hating it, but I'm hoping the manga will continue to beat the story into better shape and actually make it believable and drop the Twilight-esque flowery frigidity.

Personally I haven't read the LN, so I don't know how things progress on the romance front there (I hope they haven't completely butchered it), but I have been reading the WN lately - and there's definitely progress there on the romance front. Like, a lot of progress. After they start sharing the bed their "goodnight routine" quickly starts including a goodnight kiss, which quickly escalates to french kissing makeouts before sleep every night (which naturally makes falling asleep difficult lol). They bathe together occasionally (swimsuits on ... most of the time unless Kaede pulls something). They make out all the time.

The MC does kinda run away from taking it all the way and does his best to resist Kaede doing the opposite, but he says he wants to actually introduce himself to her parents properly before starting to bonk her daughter ... and turns he wasn't lying about that. After meeting her parents and getting acknowledged by them as Kaede's significant other, the very first thing they do that night is make love for the first (and definitely not the last) time.

So ... yeah. Not sure how it's in the LN, but I can readily suggest reading the WN - the relationship actually progresses nicely and by the halfway point they are fully together and lovemaking is very much on the table and a cleared hurdle in their relationship.

 

[roszn]

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