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I honestly don't know why the author thinks it's necessary to hamfist all this drama into the mix.
You already have a compelling story:
A remorseful boy who is getting over the killing of his sister's rapist in front of his daughter.
The daughter of the rapist having a whole world turned upside down from losing her father.
And this is marks the beginning of their stories as they try to heal and grow together.
That's it. You didn't need rando to show up to interject contrived sadcat BS. There are demons dear author. They exist plenty within their souls. The story is how they overcome them.
You already have a compelling story:
A remorseful boy who is getting over the killing of his sister's rapist in front of his daughter.
The daughter of the rapist having a whole world turned upside down from losing her father.
And this is marks the beginning of their stories as they try to heal and grow together.
That's it. You didn't need rando to show up to interject contrived sadcat BS. There are demons dear author. They exist plenty within their souls. The story is how they overcome them.