OK, so those slave raiders just popped up in the middle of town like that?
Doesn't that place have a wall or something? It sure did look like those lizardman guards were standing in front of a city gate.
They're supposed to be under constant threat from humans. You'd think that they'd at least have some defenses...
And of course the pretty dark elf's dress tears like wrapping paper. And of course the slave raiders have to be over the top stupid-evil in the most cliché way possible. "Yes, let's just bone this dark elf girl right here in the middle of the street, in an enemy town, during a slave raid. What could go wrong."
At least the religious fanatics we saw in earlier chapters were kinda interesting. But this is just pure cliché writing.