Sense. - Vol. 1 Ch. 5 - Confession

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5 chapters in, having a hard time telling what's supposed to be his day dreaming and what's actually happening in reality.
 
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You are in need of a proofreader, badly! The readers should not have to auto correct almost every sentence while reading
 

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