Sensei's White Lie - Vol. 6 Ch. 33 - The Light Shining Into the Darkness

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dude that rapist better not get any more putang from FMC or we gonna have some problems here

literally 1/3 left of chapters this is the time for revenge and good fucking
 
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told ya all,

even more messy stuff is gonna happen....

ah what the heck, Entire 8 volumes of raw of this manga is available so you can find out yourself if you wish.
 
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See, this kinda shit is why I hate this manga. Some morons were trying to say that "she wasn't going to defend her friend" or "this is senien" and the most moronic, usually on reddit, try to paint it as a good mature story about growth, romance and psychology. "Cheating is just something men do", "If you call the police, I'll have my say too", "Save this rapey cunt for me" and so much more shit. This is the most immature, highschool fanfiction Josei shit I've ever seen.
 
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@kronix well its all gonna happen no matter how much you wana deny,
its already a finished Manga that is just getting translated.

besides do not expect good to happen in this, as I told before, the story is about Redemption and nothing else more.
 
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well shit. babies really do make women stronger...that minako really showed her matureness and strength there. in my opinion at least.
and also sensei isnt as weak as she was before.
 

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This is going to be another Onani Master Kurosawa right?

Where interesting people do interesting things and interesting things happen and you think "damn, so you can actually make a good manga that isn't stupid comedy" and then suddenly everything is solved with the power of... platitudes?

I'll keep reading, but holy shit this chapter was a death flag for the series.
 
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@BCS except you don't have an MC or Kurosawa that does something good in this entire story,

every character has their own story. and it just ends up with some good getting out of what they are in and some not getting anything at all...

there is no hero or moral in this story...
 
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"He has a darkness inside of him" uh he's a fuckin' rapist that belongs in prison along with his side-piece that attempted to force an abortion on a woman who wanted to keep her baby.

Ugh.
 
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I stopped reading this a while back because the plot lines were far too twisted, I think I'm gonna drop it all together now.

I know what it's going for, a series of characters doing twisted or incredibly wrong things and finding some kind of light at the end of it.

The thing is, at least for this chapter (I've not read the last ten before so can't comment on em) it's really coming off as a "oh you can fix so and so with love".

Rapists and sexual assaulters and all other kinds of crimes can be atoned for but this is not a man who wants to atone (*additionally its not up to someone's partner to fix them) , he's only gotten less vicious because his fiancee is pregnant and he might finally be caught. But then the women around him care more about his situation than themselves or the others getting hurt by him.

It makes me want to throw up.

This has the capacity to be better written than it is, for instance the girl with the brother who seems to hold an incestuous lust for her didn't need to be included. The guy she knows who likes her and framed and beats up guys didn't need to be included. They feel like extra drama for dramas sake, that make the plot less believable and more misery porn.

A woman being blackmailed into a sexual relationship feels much more believable, him doing the same or threatening multiple others too feels believable. His partner ignoring inconvenient truths likewise is too believable.

I dunno like I've read another manga like this is in the past based around 3 people getting progressively more and more fucked up. In the beginning it felt like it was exploring the themes of identity and outside perception and it was good for the first 30 or so chapters... Then it just went off the rails with misunderstandings, characters manipulating one and other, completely stupid scenarios that made it a tiresome slog to read.

At some point in a story with so much dark twisted stuff they keep upping it and upping it and it starts feeling like a parody of itself. Darkness that eclipses the sun isn't super engaging to read if it feels like there won't be a good ending to it either.

If someone could spoil me for the rest of the manga I'd be grateful, but I'm out. Hope the rest of you enjoy however long you read this for.
 
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Of course her trash of a dumb ass mother would validate and normalize infidelity, it makes sense it explains a lot actually, however i just wants someone anyone on this story to at least for once call one of these characters on their bull shit, even the whole thing with the friend ended on them saying that Hayafumi can change with the power of love, man i can't believe this story doesn't as even one likable character.
 
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Well, I'm usually cool with poor writing as long as the premise is good, but I gotta drop this. This is some piss poor, stupid writing, that's drumming up unnatural drama. Before it was just ehhhhhhhh, sure it could be believable, with this latest chapter it's clear that the author was drumming up unnatural, forced drama to extend the life of the series. It's like Seo Kouji's stuff, except it takes it self too seriously.

It's a real shame since it started out strong, and now it feels like it's just dragging on with unnecessary bullshit.
 

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