Shichi Ha Gojuroku - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - I Have a Favor to Ask You

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This manga makes me wish there is a detective game a la danganronpa with similar supernatural premise, where the girl would replace the victim, and then came back alive after the culprit is revealed. So not only you have to uncover the mystery of the murder and the culprit, you also have to deduce the actual intended victim. XD
 
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Why did authors likes to create a lovable childhood friend
 
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It kinda felt that 1page is missing.
Edit: or am I just reading it wrong (I know you start from right to left >.>)
 
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Childhood friend is almost as pretty as the main girl so it's honestly hard to decide
 
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I think the pacing is too slow. I know the first chapter is supposed to be something that hooks the reader in, but there is something wrong when it takes 3 whole chapters that are 40+ pages long just to start the premise.
 
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Well, so, this is a detective story with horror and magical elements, around a dumb as fuck teenager who has to get actually killed by the culprit to "resolve" the mystery.
Let's add a useless childhood friend in love with the MC, but just to keep up with the clichés, let's make her never reveal her feelings, actually bully the MC and then get cucked at the end, when she reveals her love way too late.

Oh, and the characters are so cliched and boring... so let's add a way too long scarf to the MC, super strength to the childhood girl friend and a beret and google to a random club member... Oh wait, that makes it worse.

The only redeeming thing about this is the "6 deaths curse" incentive. I might stay for a bit to see if this uninspired mangaka might maybe have one good idea.
 
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Fuck you guys I've been floored by the manga so far. I'm not expecting Hemingway or Twain but this is really interesting.
 
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@aFFi Lol here we have the critically acclaimed nobody whining in the comment section. Please write something better if you're going to bitch this hard. 😂
 
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Holy crap man...
Seriously?!? Answering to a comment 10 months later...

Well, I don't remember this manga much, but the short and, crappy comment I wrote probably shows more imagination and better writing than what the author did with his story 😈🤣
 

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