Honestly, one of the biggest issues i have is trying to keep track of Locations and character names so they stay consistent.
I have made this (at this point relatively incomplete) TXT file here:
Especially for those who re-read now, If you find any mistakes in this that don't line up with previous chapters, or find something i should add, please tell me.
Some I still remember from the novel (official English):
(Some may differ from previous fan translations. It is up to you whether to match the previous fan translation or follow the official English translation)
???
Shin'enbi - MTL Translates this one to either "Dawn Man" or "New PVC". I have literally no f*cking idea, so i just left it as is.
The novel simply refers him as "The True King" or just "The King".
Empire of Asbell -->
Asvelt Empire
Imperial Ninja dude - Alvin -->
Arvin
Imperial Female General - General Rosenmarie ?Surname -->
Rosenmarie von Berlietta
Imperial Chancellor - D'armes -->
Darmes Guski
Imperial (somewhat bowl Haircut?) General - General Felix -->
Felix von Sieger
Kingdom of Farnest -->
Kingdom of Fernest
(For rank, "at this point" because as the story progresses, their ranks will continue to rise)
MC Girl - Major Olivia Valedstorm --> OK
Adjutant Girl - ?Rank Claudia Young -->
Second Lieutenant Claudia Jung
Strategist guy - ?Rank Ashton Zenefielder -->
Warrant Officer Ashton Senefelder
Grandpa general - General Paul ?Surname -->
General Paul von Baltza
Stick up his *ss Officer - ?Rank Otto ?Surname -->
Senior Colonel Otto Steiner
Death god - Zed/Z --> just "
Z"
Fishface General - Major General Neinhart -->
Brigadier General Neinhardt Blanche
His Adjutant girl - Second Lieutenant Katerina Rayners -->
Second Lieutenant Katerina Reinas
Librarian Girl - Claris ?Surname -->
Claryss or Clarice. Her name appears in volumes 3 and 4, written as "Claryss". She reappears in volume 7 part 2 (the final volume), but is written as "Clarice". Her surname is never mentioned, but in the last volume it is revealed that
she is General Paul's granddaughter. She may have used the surname "von Baltza" as well, I'm not sure. If you write down the surname now, it will be a spoiler, so leave it as is.
Holy Land of Mekia
Sorceress who fought Felix - Amelia Stolast --> OK
Seraph (Queen? General?) - Sofilia Hell Mekia -->
Seraph Sofitia Hell Mekia (Seraph = Queen)
Emotionless High ranking Sorceress - Lara Mira Crytsal -->
Lara Mira Crystal
Continents
Dubetika - Main Continent? -->
Duvedirica, one of several continents, I think
??? - Dragon Fang Continent? --> In the novel, "Dragon Fang" is written as "Wyrmfang". The name of their continent is never mentioned. But that doesn't matter, they never appear again in the story.
Empire of Asbell -->
Asvelt Empire
Imperial Capital Orsted -->
Imperial Capital, Olsted
Kingdom of Farnest -->
Kingdom of Fernest
?Capital -->
Royal Capital, Fis
Leticia Castle - Neinhart's Castle (If you've got a better name please tell me) --> OK, its Leticia Castle
Citadel City of Emleid -->
Emaleid Citadel
Fort Caspar --> OK
Holy Land of Mekia
Holy City of Elsphere - Capital --> OK
La Chaim Palace - Seraph's Palace --> OK
The Hall of Ascent - Throne Room? --> Novel calls it "
The Cloudy Chamber"
Imperial Knight orders
Azure Knights --> OK
General Rosenmarie - ?Surname -->
Rosenmarie von Berlietta
Crimson Knights --> OK
Lt. Col. Volmer - dead --> OK
Species
Normal Humans?
Abyss People/Abyssals --> novel calls them "
Deep Folk"