This really didn't do it for me. Part of it is the whole bizarre dead twin thing. But aside from that . . . I dunno, the feelings didn't come through for me, and I thought it was kind of disjointed. The way the transitions went without any warning might not have jarred so much if I dug the characters enough to remember them well. As it is, what happened is suddenly I'm looking at different people, trying to remember who they are and what their connection is, if any, to the people in the frame before. Then by the time I've started figuring out what the dynamics in the new scene are, it's another scene and I have to do it all over again.
It's not like I didn't want to like it--I'm a major yuri fan and of course a book lover, so yuri with a book focus I'm going to give a ton of leeway . . . apparently, this needed a ton and a half.