Shiosai No Lily - Vol. 1 Ch. 5 - Reunion in the Sea

[misopogon]

If Lily was a "violent badass pirate captain", Al would just put her down.

The magic of writing is such that you can create a scenario where he can't actually do that, and is forced out of his comfort zone of military orthodoxy to get into more complicated situations. Fascinating stuff!

 

[Beinmote9z]

i shouldn't have opened this comment section😭

It’s a pity that Lily was raped she certainly won’t be allowed to marry Alfred anymore.
Perhaps at the end of the story Alfred will marry someone else
Lily will be sentenced to be hanged for being a pirate. (

 

[ChancedPotato]

It's facinating how having the ML be the MC in this kind of story can make you see how kind of insane FLs are when you're not on her side. The usual cliche misunderstanding actually feels believable when you don't see the usual shenanigans the FL gets into before the ML misunderstands something.

 

[ChancedPotato]

Actually, now that I think about it more her getting attacked and maybe raped kinda ruined this story for me. I feel like the author jumped the shark or changed the entire tone of the plot, there will denifinely be no way for a happy ending now since it feels like the tragedy flag can't be removed anymore. I'm predicting it now, ML will commit murder suicide after she becomes too infamous for ML to let her live.

 

[UdenEmpati]

The magic of writing is such that you can create a scenario where he can't actually do that, and is forced out of his comfort zone of military orthodoxy to get into more complicated situations. Fascinating stuff!

Your scenario doesn't really gel with the first chapters of this series, though.
Sure, it'd work if you just re-wrote the entire thing from scratch, but that's not what we have.

And at that point, you might as well just say "I'd like this better if it were a different story".
And it wouldn't be better, you'd just find it more to your tastes.

 

[misopogon]

And at that point, you might as well just say "I'd like this better if it were a different story".
And it wouldn't be better, you'd just find it more to your tastes.

Oh, I assure you, if it were more to my taste, it would be better!

 

[UdenEmpati]

Oh, I assure you, if it were more to my taste, it would be better!

Okay.

 

[eren760]

So nobody is going to point out that her stupidness got two people killed in the first chapter who were trying to save them and she didn't feel a thing about them 😔😔
She was lonely because her CF wasn't there to play with her whose fault is that that happened.If she wanted to be with him why not join the navy like him and be with him most of the time.
I wish she didn't have a peanut size brain