Shokei Flag no Akuyaku Kizoku ni Tensei Shita ga, Shinitakunai node Yami Mahou o Kiwamete Heroine-tachi o Sukuimasu - Ch. 3.2

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I mean, we know from chapter 1, page 1 that they're totally fine with each other, so this is just strange and effectively useless ending page...
A large part of storytelling is the journey. We know that eventually they're fine with one another, but we don't know what brought them together; of course, this is slop at its finest, so it'll probably be solved in a chapter or two at most, but it still serves to keep the reader vaguely interested enough in finding out to keep reading.
 
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It'd be interesting if the sudden yandere turn was a side effect of dark healing.
I don't think that is so much to healing I think that nature of her has been buried for a while I mean even after all the horrible things he did I think she would have forgived him if he had just come to face for personally instead of running away
 
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I don't think that is so much to healing I think that nature of her has been buried for a while I mean even after all the horrible things he did I think she would have forgived him if he had just come to face for personally instead of running away
They'll probably rescope the original deaths at the womens hands, that they were always yandere, and overwhelmingly pissed he never chose them, and went for the "If I can't have him, nobody can!"
 
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Out of the frying pan and into the heart of Chernobyl Reactor 4 on April 26, 1986 1:23 AM local time.
 
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unless the author reveals that the healing has brainwashing side effects I'm about to drop this title for just being too half-assed and delusional 😅

can writing like this even survive 20chapters before getting axed??
 
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OK, so what just happened at the end?

I thought this was Diabolo's atonement story? Is it about to become Ciel's villain origin story? 😂
 

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