"SHOPSKILL" Sae Areba, Dungeon ka Sita Sekaidemo Rakusyou da: Hakugai Sareta Shounen no Saikyou Zamaa Life - Ch. 21 - Don't get used to the new world.

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Author really dropped the ball here, all he had to do was give one reason why the MC was still in disguise because its a strange thing to gloss over.

Lol, all MC had to do was say a few sentences:

- "My original purpose to disguise myself is finished, but my female disguise has become such a brand name in this country for my dungeon clearing services that it makes no sense to start from scratch. And, if another group ever comes after me, they'll never be able to figure out my identity and hurt the people I love"

-"The girl I saved just lost her entire entire family. I'm afraid what she would do if she discovers the last person she had to rely wasn't who she said she was...and I don't want to leave her all alone. There's no harm staying like this for just a little while longer"

But nope, quiet MC wants to stay an enigma, even to the readers.
about the girl he saved she does know the female appearance is false
she also saw his memories and real appearance
 
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Author really dropped the ball here, all he had to do was give one reason why the MC was still in disguise because its a strange thing to gloss over.

Lol, all MC had to do was say a few sentences:

- "My original purpose to disguise myself is finished, but my female disguise has become such a brand name in this country for my dungeon clearing services that it makes no sense to start from scratch. And, if another group ever comes after me, they'll never be able to figure out my identity and hurt the people I love"

-"The girl I saved just lost her entire entire family. I'm afraid what she would do if she discovers the last person she had to rely wasn't who she said she was...and I don't want to leave her all alone. There's no harm staying like this for just a little while longer"

But nope, quiet MC wants to stay an enigma, even to the readers.
Didn't he also not tell the truth to the childhood friend and little girl? So as far as they know, he's dead and "she" just took his place
 
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I forget why he disguises himself as a hot big boobs girl and why time skips and never goes back been a dude :/
 
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Guys…he can’t drop his disguise like nothing happened.

His female disguise is extremely famous. Her image also represents hope for a lot of people she can’t just “disappear”.

He seems to also doesn’t want people to find out who he really is :/.
 
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Ok, no. Dropping this here. And not just because why is the MC still using the female disguise. That could at least get justified. The reason I am dropping this is do to the story is censored to the point it can't do what it needs to be able to do. With a group that is kidnaping and rapping, the MC needs to be able to kill. If this was just a problem of his willingness it would be fine. But the author is preventing the MC from killing by using outside factors to do it for him. This shows the author is not willing to have him kill when needed and will go as far as such a forced and round about way of avoiding. My one hope was the story progressed in a direction that wouldn't make that matter. But clearly it will. Its a shame, I like the setting, and the characters, but why make a story if your not ok with its content.
 
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Guys…he can’t drop his disguise like nothing happened.

His female disguise is extremely famous. Her image also represents hope for a lot of people she can’t just “disappear”.

He seems to also doesn’t want people to find out who he really is :/.
The famous part yes, the who he is doesn't matter at all. That was to keep the girls safe as they were at his home, and so knowing who he is would lead to finding them, now they are known to be under "her" protections, that defeats the entire point of the identity portion of it. But yeah the made a name for "herself" part would be dumb to abandon as it makes money.
 
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The famous part yes, the who he is doesn't matter at all. That was to keep the girls safe as they were at his home, and so knowing who he is would lead to finding them, now they are known to be under "her" protections, that defeats the entire point of the identity portion of it. But yeah the made a name for "herself" part would be dumb to abandon as it makes money.
I feel like you’re right about the secret identity part since it was to keep the girls safe but now everyone knows genderbent Mc is protecting them. :/


The famous part was obvious for me since it’s logical Mc female disguise is too important for him(money) and for others(hope/useful). That’s why I’m surprised people are this mad.


But I really wish it was better written. The story had potential but the bad writting is killing it…
 
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This is a jumbled mess. I guess because it’s adapting a WN?

Why is he still a girl? Does his high school friend girl know? Suddenly living in a tent room? So weird. Feels like the axe will come if they can’t slow TF down.
 
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I feel like you’re right about the secret identity part since it was to keep the girls safe but now everyone knows genderbent Mc is protecting them. :/


The famous part was obvious for me since it’s logical Mc female disguise is too important for him(money) and for others(hope/useful). That’s why I’m surprised people are this mad.


But I really wish it was better written. The story had potential but the bad writting is killing it…
Actually to be perfectly clear, his guy form would disconnect him from them. The reason his normal form would be connected to them was he was the homeowner so knowing him could lead to the house then them. Now they are staying at a shelter, with him in girl form. So the entire point of having a work form that rivals wont find them by looking into is now flipped, switching back would again disconnect them.
The famous side is good for business, but with how short they are on manpower and in need of anyone able to get stuff done he could easily make a name for both forms. So not really essential.
But yeah I am dropping this here, because the author isn't willing to commit to the story. That method of killing the enemy to avoid having the MC kill. It means that the author isn't willing to let the MC kill anyone no matter how needed, it isn't the MC is avoiding it, or just not ready to. And the next enemy being a group that is kidnaping and rapping, to have a hard limit that the MC isn't allowed to kill do to censorship is far to grate of a limit on the story. Why publish a story at all if your not going to allow key elements?
 
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Interesting, things changed from WN already
It wasn't mother that got kidnapped, it was aunt who got a critical injury but was healed by MC, and gangster raided that house, kidnapped her kill uncle, etc, many many chapters later, she was recused by MC and team (that dude mc just talked to), she soon later start up cult with only women and kill all man in sight lol, expect MC cuz MC was her savior, and willing to make MC a god/pope of her cult lol

by aunt/mother, i am not refer to MC, i am refer to that girl who couldn't move

well it is already different from chapter 14ish, that wheel girl was actually child who was full of energy
i supposed that where WN and LN went different route huh
Could you spoil me I'm curious, is the MC going to keep crossdressing? Because it feels like it's just an excuse to have b🍈🍈bs, yuri bait and cheap fanservice instead of a good actual valid reason in the story 💀 so could you spoil me if it's going to end at some point or be the main thing?

Because author's lack of balls for not killing enemies is already annoying but keeping the yuri bait when I can just read "whisper me a love song" or any yuri out there to have some good gay shi instead of this.
 
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Why not just make your character female from the start? What a convoluted way to go about it. Also pacing and dialogs are a mass. Its almost unintelligible narrative wise.
 
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I'm really confused... Did we skip forward or something?

Honestly can't tell if I should reread to see if that helps, or just stop here...
 
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He really enjoys his... current form so much so he doesn't want to go back, does he?
 

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