"SHOPSKILL" Sae Areba, Dungeon ka Sita Sekaidemo Rakusyou da: Hakugai Sareta Shounen no Saikyou Zamaa Life - Ch. 23

[Vincentius]

Between the random gore and this stupid genderbending im done with this

Same. The genderbending was fine at first, because it made a modicum of sense, but now the cat's out of the bag, it's really just the author regretting they didn't write a female MC for the yuri.

And I'm fine with gore, but it's very a mise en place thing; this is just cheap shock value to try and be edgy.

 

[TestAddress]

What in the hell were pages 17 & 18 💀

PORN

 

[TestAddress]

Same. The genderbending was fine at first, because it made a modicum of sense, but now the cat's out of the bag, it's really just the author regretting they didn't write a female MC for the yuri.

And I'm fine with gore, but it's very a mise en place thing; this is just cheap shock value to try and be edgy.

I agree the author wanted yuri right now because it sells and bbobs will stay breasted.

 

[VF89]

This is not a level of 'Guro' that's acceptable to me, TBH...
And there's no tag on this.

 

[MeePotato]

it's been a while since I've read this but

yo wtf is that scene

 

[Colorsparks]

Yeah I'll probably drop this too, that head ripping off scene wasn't graphic but the content is going too far out of my taste like I'm just not into manga like this since it'll probably get edgier.

Also idk I'm into gender bending but this really does just seem like the author wants a "male" protagonist but prefers drawing attractive women so they did this, it doesn't feel like an actual genderbending series the vibes aren't there

 

[Werebearguy]

This chapter sure was rough to read. Not because of the long delay or the grammar, but because nothing of ANY importance was said or shown. What I want to know is when the MC will stop wearing that goofy samurai girl disguise. Dude already finished his business with that idiot that he wanted to hide from, so there's no need to stay in his fake female disguise.

 

[t28]

Classic guy that kills during sex

Can’t stand that people get some power or influence and inevitably go all Diddy and exploitative about it.

Why can’t people just enjoy fucking for what it is?

 

[ciera]

Thank you for the release

 

[Chusep]

Fuck this snuff shit, time to drop it I guess

 

[Smokron]

Yeah I have no idea what's going on anymore. Dropping this I guess.

 

[Maverun]

Things are so different from WN lol

 

[Antairan]

Tl here, i know and I noticed it too, I admit that it isn't a good tl but some pages of this chapter was hard to translate. I've been trying to improve on my tl up until now! Thanks for the criticism

Honest recommendation, you can input the text into chatGPT and tell it to leave the text as-is, but to fix the grammar, and you should get a pretty clean revision. Of course, look out for hallucinations, but if you give gpt some clear cut instructions, it will do a stellar job at this.

 

[KuroZer0]

Jesus!!! Someone forgot their safe word.

 

[Seifenbroten]

Its just your "the mc should never kill but its fine if its someone pure evil" Thrope... love it
Interesting/understandable villains are way too hard to write so lets just make im laughable evil -.-

 

[Wolvenworks]

I don’t even know what’s going on anymore.

 

[Stratton3679]

Between the random gore and this stupid genderbending im done with this

Same

 

[Grye]

Huh
What

 

[le3]

Is this the 'segg brutal' things you kids always talking about?

 

[demonslender]

half a year is far too long for an update of less than 20 pages. i don't trust anyone in this series to be a half decent person so i wouldn't let my guard down in a shelter full of strangers.