strangely, I quite like this, she's still vulnurable, yet try to change, whereas the other one, the girl just go straight up gangsta, and for me, that gap is too big, but it's also possible
I think the other one has more impact, particularly in that she doesn't say aloud that she's been sobbing and waiting the entire time. Though this falls more in line with expectations so far. Lets see which fits better in the long run...