Sometimes Even Reality Is a Lie! - Ch. 211 - A Wonderful Dream

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Nah, that meme page broke the serious vibe to me... Although I have to admit it is pretty funny...
 
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Pg4 "If i stopped, I'd have had to accept your mother's death" is clunky. Either add "had" before "stopped" or remove it from the second. Otherwise you're mixing tenses, which feels bad to read. The contraction also is making it worse.
 
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Cute phone stand.

Them living together for a couple years before he and Nanami get their own place is probably a good thing if he's been missing out due to dad working.

Plenty of sugar this chapter.
 

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