Souda, Baikoku Shiyou: Tensai Ouji no Akaji Kokka Saisei Jutsu - Vol. 1 Ch. 3.3

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[TulipMoon]

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Any errors you see in the translation, please let me know

 

[Sebee1]

thanks for tl

 

[Opticalwinter]

@TulipMoon thanks for the TL! 😃

A few possible improvements :

"If they fight this way, I'm sure even a small army wouldn't stand up to Marden." rather than "would"? I'm unsure. Unless it's trying to convey that Marden is so weak that a smaller force would do just as fine in which case "If they fight this way, I'm sure even a smaller force would *defeat Marden". * I know defeat is different than stand up to but 'standing up' sounds a bit off when trying to convey that even a reduced force would be more than enough.

What or who is "trace?" maybe it's a character I've forgotten? Or a TL error? Edit: corrected by someone that it's a character. Never mind.

A typeset error on page 6, "the" is broken into two lines despite having space to fit on one line

Page 10 "Yes, your highness" sounds like he's answering a command rather than thinking out loud. I think "Yes... Your highness" would be better. Also, I'm unsure on the apostrophe on "subjects", but posessives aren't my strong point.

Hopefully that helps some. Its overall a very good translation job though, I'm just using my experience from literature studies class to polish a bit. 😃

 

[Lioslin]

@Opticalwinter Trace was the soldier he called out last chapter for having his spear upside-down.

 

[Opticalwinter]

@Lioslin OH, thank you. Theres so many manga I'm reading sometimes I forget characters.

 

[StaticTransit]

@Opticalwinter The apostrophe is correct. "Subject" in this case is singular, so "subject's" is the correct possessive here.

 

[zwheinhander]

@Opticalwinter Marden is the invading army and they're being pushed back. So yeah, they're saying Marden is a lot weaker than expected.

 

[KINGwaldo]

This point i think the universe is spiting the prince i think at some point he is gonna march into enemy territory to surrender and the just give up for no reason

 

[anak_sampah]

That moment when you challenge elite 4 with your lv99 pokemon...

 

[TulipMoon]

@Opticalwinter Thank you very much for your help!
Trace is the character that in the last chapter had the spear upside down, I translated the name wrong but I corrected it again, an apology for that

I apply the corrections right now

 

[Yuneri]

@Opticalwinter
I am pretty sure it's would as he's stating that an army that uses this same strategy can stand up to Marden, the one who's invading them.
awks i posted this late i guess since your comment got updated lol

 

[Justking14]

So the soldier decided that the battle was too easy for him and decided to start fighting with his fists alone?

 

[Digi-Lib]

That comander is nuts. Is he related to Guts?

 

[simcacwan]

thaaanks!

 

[saifors]

man really went gg ez

 

[Estria]

Holy shit dude just straight up goes berserk style on them lol

 

[Skiphon]

dude is about go bring his fist to a sword fight... and win

 

[A_Crappy_Connoisseurs]

Saitama would be so proud..

 

[krater]

when the fights too damn easy that you have to give yourself a handicap to win