@DarknessAssassin
Wow lots to compare.
I like the attempt to gal the character names when said by the gyaru bitch.
I have no idea if the magazine is going 18+ or she is being "graduated", as in fired/resigning/retired from the magazine. This tl and Slayer Scans say 18+ but Squiggles coalition says graduating.
Mistress fits better than lovers imo. Lovers people generally think of a single couple. With mistresses, it's usually associated with kept women who are not a legal wife.
Concubine would be an even more accurate term for a member of a harem but most people would think of king's and emperor's concubines.
Instead of "prostitute", "bitch" fits better, or "whore".
I think in Japanese, "bitch" is used in place of "slut", as in "a bitch in heat". "Prostitute" is normally used to describe the sex worker, not as a deragotary term, "whore" or "slut" fit better.
"She's just a cheap prostitute."
"She's just a cheap bitch."
"She's just a cheap slut."
"She's just a cheap whore."