Succubus na Kimi wa Otto wo Otosenai - Ch. 1

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Mistranslations on P26 and P27.
“I love you so much Kiyo-chan” -> “There is no one else for me but you, Kiyo-chan.”

And on P27 (the actually significant one):
“I don’t want to lose you too, Koutarou-san” -> “I don’t want it to be anyone else but you, Koutarou-san.”

The one on P27 currently sounds like she has a regretful past experience with another partner which is not implied in the slightest in the original.
 
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How does it feel to live my dream? :qq:

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Small, pedantic grammar note:

"specie" isn't a word. "species" is already the singular and plural form of the term. So it should be "I am just a regular human being, a common species" and "My wife... is part of the succubus species."


Also why does the closing page say this is a oneshot, but the listing is for chapter 1 of an ongoing series? Which one is wrong?
 
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Also quick question - is this a serialization of the oneshot or simply the oneshot ?
 
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Yet another "succubus love interest in a modern setting" manga. There's not much originality nowadays.

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